C'Est La Vie Poem by Valerie Dohren

C'Est La Vie

Rating: 4.8


Had my fill
of the almost empty pot –

the residuum is tasteless,
unappealing

and the staff of life
dried and moulded a long time ago
leaving me hungry.

Still, there remains a generous dollop
of cynicism on my plate

which suits my palate
especially for the evening meal.

C’est la vie …..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 12 August 2013

A large dollop of good imagery here Val drinking from the pool of life.

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Heather Wilkins 13 August 2013

life throws us many curves, accepting is the challenge good write

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Len Webster 13 August 2013

Neatly done. You capture the mood well.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 August 2013

What remains on the plate is acceptable in whatever state it is. Life is like that. Nicely put. Thank you.

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Unwritten Soul 12 August 2013

This piece sounds a bit different than what you have done before, still i can feel your words around..so good to try something new_Soul

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Patricia Grantham 27 August 2013

C'est la Vie I believe that is French for it is good, please correct me if I am wrong Val. I studied French in High School. I particularly love this poem because it says that life will not always be a cup of tea. The cup of tea is most enjoyable when it is fresh and piping hot and savored with each sip. After awhile when cup empties there maybe a residue that doesn't look to appealing at the bottom of the cup. Make the best of it no matter how it looks. An inspiring write.

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Smoky Hoss 22 August 2013

You speak wisely few words, for the many; very well done!

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 August 2013

Very Interesting poem.. Either life change our taste or we change our taste. Captured very well. loved it...

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Juan Olivarez 19 August 2013

Wow. Very interesting. A little cynicism maybe? Very apropos.

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Lucifera Santez 14 August 2013

fabulous, you are a genius val. :)

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