Vishal Sharma

Freshman - 524 Points (10th july 1996/Samastipur (Bihar) / India)

You Are My Dark Choclate - Poem by Vishal Sharma

Packed in the wrapper
you do appear,
with some melted face
with my long gaze
and so tasty to eat
so nasty to heat
and clumsy enough
to look at you
and sticking to my lips
between them you slips
and lost in my mouth
and again feel me thirst
that you are again gone
and i muddling my head
though about your shape
and about your witty nose
and my last given rose
that you are my fairy
and the rumours about
you i hate,
as you are my dark choclate.

Comments about You Are My Dark Choclate by Vishal Sharma

  • Gold Star - 10,101 Points Heather Wilkins (6/25/2013 10:58:00 AM)

    you are my dark chocolate sweet thought and good taste in candy. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Kelly Seale (6/22/2013 4:31:00 AM)

    mmmm, Tastey Write! Very good Vishal! ; -) Kelly. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Simran Arora (6/21/2013 10:32:00 PM)

    Mast h.....likd d rymng, styl.... :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (6/21/2013 12:53:00 PM)

    too romantic poem,
    very audacious in nature,
    well done (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,458 Points Unwritten Soul (6/21/2013 12:32:00 PM)

    Dark chocolate wrapped with mint spirit leaf...sound a nice romantic combination..what do u think hahaha joking..a very nice and young feel poem to me_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 366 Points Poetheart Morgan (6/21/2013 11:29:00 AM)

    100% cocoa. Here in Brazil we understand well
    these effects that it causes on us. Very good poet. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,910 Points Sekharan Pookkat (6/21/2013 11:21:00 AM)

    I like your dark chocolate But keep your teeth away from it.Red lips will turn into black- It is not good (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,624 Points David Wood (6/21/2013 11:19:00 AM)

    Not a bad poem. Try writing a five stanza poem along the same lines. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 21, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, July 26, 2013

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