In the bright yellow flowers
And the dark green leaves
I see your cheerful visage.
The sky seen through the
Openings cast a gloomy
Spell on my mind though.
The sweet fragrance of the
Fresh yellow flowers, arrives
Wafted by the cool breeze.
It reminds me of your aroma,
And body heat, which I only
Fancied but never basked in.
Dhaka
23 December 2014
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Visage! ! With the romance of the yellow flowers. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Stunning sensitivity as delicate as the yellow flowers so beautifully written and thank you for sharing!
I am much inspired by your appreciation of the poem, dear poet Hazel Durham. Thank you.
...it reminds me of your aroma.... How the sense of smell can trigger memories.... There are those I search and seek for..... Stashed away, like those in your yellow flowers. Beautiful! You return me to PEACEful pastures
Thanks, my dear PEACE loving poetess Susan Lacovara, for sharing your feelings and thoughts, triggered by the quoted line of my poem. Much inspired, PEACE to you!
I read Bano's poem Peele Phool and immediately switched over to your page to read the original one. It's an amazing poem and Bano is successful in keeping the essence of the original work.................10
Thanks for reading my poem and Bano's Urdu translation of it, and praising both. Much inspired by your comment, @Akhtar Jawad Sahab.
A beautiful poem, I have translated it in Urdu...................10
Thank you so much, @Khalida Bano Ali, for honoring my poem by translating it into Urdu. Although I wouldn; t understand the translation, it's an honor anyway and thank you for doing the favor.
A lovely poem about untouchable beauty.