Y// The Rain Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y// The Rain

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The rain came down hard
Hurting the skin of my head

Worries blinded my thoughts
Then I prayed for guidance

I started to imagine
the best possible outcome

It drove away my worry
it helped me see clearly

the outcome was
as good as possible

Thursday, July 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: problems,rain,worries
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 04 January 2017

True Manna Blessing Dust Wilted Earth the beauty of sweet rain after drought is appreciated by rain missing parched people true manna blessing dust wilted earth Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Y// Rain' by the poet Aufie Zophy. Dedicated to the poet Aufie Zophy.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 11 July 2016

we have to think of the best possible outcome to solve a problem...How true you are! enjoyed the poem and your imagination..

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Unwritten Soul 08 July 2016

Pouring rain washed away your worry like it wash away all the stain from the clouds...I Like it :)

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