Y.. Charms Of The Sea Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y.. Charms Of The Sea

Rating: 4.8


</>The white foam
of majestic waves
usurps my spirit

The perfume
of the sea
pervades my mind

The reflection
of the late morning sun
beams into my heart

The sound roars and
my whole being is seized
by the magic of the moment

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Louis Rams 28 October 2011

you have truly captured the beauty of the seas. gr8888t job!

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Malaya Roses 29 October 2011

The poet is really understand the beauty in such mesmeric nature's moments. He manage to make me miss those moments and the tranquility lay within each moment. Excellent! ! !

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Cristina Teodor 02 November 2011

Your verses are relaxing the mind, transposing spirit into 'the magic of the moment'..Cristina Teodor

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(De Va) 02 November 2011

beautiful imagry, ty so much

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Spiritual Seeker 01 November 2011

Simply....simplyyyyyy...beautifullllll! A great 10.

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Walterrean Salley 30 October 2011

Hi Hans. Nature is one of my favorite subjects - especially the sea. This poem captures a perfect scene, and gives a nostalgic longing for such natural euphoric experience. I thoroughly enjoyed this great piece of work. Thanks.

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Ency Bearis 29 October 2011

You remind me how nice to live by the seaside, now just be it and the desert place. Great vivid write.

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