Hazel Durham


Without Compare


The start was slow and unpredictable,
You attracted me with your nature and handsome face,
So soft, like my own secret loft,
High emotions, tenderness, openness,
But your soul carries a heavy load,
Like a farm gate, that needs to be tightly closed,
You make me feel like a precious stone, luscious, flaming red,
With your supreme love in bed,
So macho, you always led,
Many facets of your character emerged with surprise,
Hand in hand through this tranquil land,
Fields wet dripping with past toil,
Mountains glazed with cotton wool mist,
You have me at the top of your wishing list,
Embracing with pasts,
Filled with sorrow and pain,
In a leafy lane,
The breeze softly caressing our fragile hearts,
Within our lair,
Your care,
Is without compare.

Submitted: Friday, March 22, 2013

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  • Rookie - 45 Points Yash Shinde (3/13/2014 11:00:00 AM)

    .....wonderful use of imagery...n metaphors....a great work as always hazel.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 931 Points Kanav Justa (1/1/2014 7:26:00 AM)

    .. a brilliant romantic poem... every sentence is beautiful.. and love the title as well... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,773 Points Ramesh Rai (11/14/2013 1:12:00 PM)

    Keep writing my friend.poetry needs you more. without you poetry will loose her pacific balance. but dont forget to invite to make me deprive from making a dive in your swt emotion (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 166 Points Maya Hanson (4/7/2013 5:28:00 PM)

    So romantic- you have me at the top of your wishing list
    I wish I could write like this! ! ! Great job
    ~mye3 poet (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 717 Points Thomas A Robinson (3/26/2013 9:40:00 PM)

    I agree with Lyda... care is to love as rays are to the sun.
    the sun may be 93 million miles away but the rays are felt here.
    Some that loves you may be six thousand miles away but the care can be felt
    anyway. Love your piem Hazel. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 81 Points Vizard Dhawan (3/23/2013 2:02:00 AM)

    nice romantic saga..deeply written with full suppliment of romance..you have just do a full justice with ur poem..a splendid write, , , enjoyable (Report) Reply

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