Hazel Durham


Without Compare


The start was slow and unpredictable,
You attracted me with your nature and handsome face,
So soft, like my own secret loft,
High emotions, tenderness, openness,
But your soul carries a heavy load,
Like a farm gate, that needs to be tightly closed,
You make me feel like a precious stone, luscious, flaming red,
With your supreme love in bed,
So macho, you always led,
Many facets of your character emerged with surprise,
Hand in hand through this tranquil land,
Fields wet dripping with past toil,
Mountains glazed with cotton wool mist,
You have me at the top of your wishing list,
Embracing with pasts,
Filled with sorrow and pain,
In a leafy lane,
The breeze softly caressing our fragile hearts,
Within our lair,
Your care,
Is without compare.

Submitted: Friday, March 22, 2013

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  • Gold Star - 18,648 Points Chinedu Dike (1/14/2015 4:17:00 AM)

    A beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated and nicely encapsulated into a fantastic poem. A superbly written piece. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 103 Points Yash Shinde (3/13/2014 11:00:00 AM)

    .....wonderful use of imagery...n metaphors....a great work as always hazel.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 267 Points Adeline Foster (2/22/2014 12:43:00 PM)

    Nice love poem. Read mine - O Dearest Love -
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,059 Points Kanav Justa (1/1/2014 7:26:00 AM)

    .. a brilliant romantic poem... every sentence is beautiful.. and love the title as well... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,558 Points Ramesh Rai (11/14/2013 1:12:00 PM)

    Keep writing my friend.poetry needs you more. without you poetry will loose her pacific balance. but dont forget to invite to make me deprive from making a dive in your swt emotion (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 387 Points Maya Hanson (4/7/2013 5:28:00 PM)

    So romantic- you have me at the top of your wishing list
    I wish I could write like this! ! ! Great job
    ~mye3 poet (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Karen Degnan-foiles (3/30/2013 3:12:00 PM)

    Loved it! You really kept my attention... and what a beautiful story too.
    ~Karen (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,025 Points Valerie Dohren (3/28/2013 2:30:00 PM)

    Romantic and heartfelt - another lovely poem Hazel. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,035 Points Thomas A Robinson (3/26/2013 9:40:00 PM)

    I agree with Lyda... care is to love as rays are to the sun.
    the sun may be 93 million miles away but the rays are felt here.
    Some that loves you may be six thousand miles away but the care can be felt
    anyway. Love your piem Hazel. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,354 Points Sayeed Abubakar (3/24/2013 6:38:00 AM)

    A very good poem. I like it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 175 Points Vizard Dhawan (3/23/2013 2:02:00 AM)

    nice romantic saga..deeply written with full suppliment of romance..you have just do a full justice with ur poem..a splendid write, , , enjoyable (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,379 Points Dave Walker (3/22/2013 5:36:00 PM)

    A great poem, a good write. (Report) Reply

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