Hazel Durham


Life


Places, faces, friends or foe,
Life gathers as we sow,
Dreams scatter as harsh winds blow,
Lovers say their empty words then go,
Familiar voices we long to hear,
To comfort us in all our fears,
Life as complex as the incoming tides,
Sometimes soft and serene,
More times fast and turbulent,
Bringing us plenty of woe,
Our time will come, when we will know,
The calm, the stillness,
The silence of our souls.

Submitted: Monday, October 01, 2012
Edited: Friday, November 02, 2012

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  • Gold Star - 20,575 Points Akhtar Jawad (1/8/2015 10:04:00 AM)

    Places, faces, friends or foe,
    Life gathers as we sow,
    A great write........................10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 683 Points Jak Black (11/5/2014 6:24:00 AM)

    A beautiful piece of writing. Thoughtful and meaningful. Well done Hazel, you are very talented.
    Twenty great comments, only nine votes. Amazing! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,578 Points Achill Lad (9/25/2014 5:26:00 AM)

    Life in a nutshell, for the vast majority. Wish I was as optimistic as you though. Ha ha. Once again a pleasure to read. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Dermot Mc Garthy (3/29/2013 8:37:00 AM)

    I like it best when your are inspired by your obvious inherent spirituality, and act on this. This is an example here, but have seen it in some of your other poems too-where all the bullshit of living this life will be unmasked for us all one day, near or far.........when our souls shall indeed be still. Rock on. Dermo (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 182 Points Karen Sinclair (10/27/2012 9:35:00 AM)

    A nice write of retrospect and searching deeper understanding....thought provoker...tyvm karen (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,249 Points Lyn Paul (10/27/2012 7:44:00 AM)

    What a story you have told in such few words. Well written. thank You (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,001 Points Gulsher John (10/22/2012 12:35:00 PM)

    n your poem LIFE in the first half you followed the rhyming pattern like sow an d fow and then fear and hear, then suddenly turned to free style.thou msg is complete........ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Rigzin Namgyal (10/10/2012 6:10:00 AM)

    we reap as we sow..life is all about ups and down..dreams scatter..lovers leave..we have to surf against all those woes which life gifts us..and still look for that ray of hope..
    ..a beautiful poem..full of optimism..giving you 10/10..
    ..keep writing.. (Report) Reply

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