hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 44,856 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Wings To Wishes - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

I wish to float
A free boat
With beautiful wings and peaceful heart
To visit as many shores in different parts

I have believed in hope
Thousands walk daily on dangerous rope
With no chance of easy peace
I want them chance to live at ease

I trust honey bees
Freedom is easy for them and free
As they are beautiful and delicate
They can’t go too far to relate

My wishes travel faster than ray
I take opportunity and pray
Let my heart go with message
With golden ink on fresh page

I give wings to wishes
That may finish
My bond with universe
Let then people live happily sans curse

Sometimes hearts of people exchange
Wish or desire for peace in present age
They have realized importance of love
Peace is only message to believe

I open my palm and release
The heart may blow with wind at ease
The fragrance may have it sown charm
I hope nothing wrong with it or harm


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  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/14/2014 8:28:00 PM)

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  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/23/2013 8:47:00 PM)

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    Bilal Pakbiz nice
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  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/22/2013 7:25:00 PM)

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    Preeti Sabhar.. I trust honey bees Freedom is easy for them and free As they are beautiful and delicate They can’t go too far to relate...See More
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    Hasmukh Mehta welcome yoones nooroozi and dj roy bab
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  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/20/2013 5:08:00 PM)

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    Wyndlyn Fernando very convincing…: ^…^ that was a very nice thought …mr.Hasmukh Mehta…good to see you again
    December 14 at 8: 25pm via mobile · Unlike · 1

    Ramesh Rai let the wishes be flying above sky.
    December 15 at 9: 59pm via mobile · Edited · Unlike · 1

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome persian khushi
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  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/14/2013 6:02:00 AM)

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  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/13/2013 8:01:00 AM)

    Debra Stanza Melody This is a very wonderful piece of writing! Peace 13 minutes ago · Unlike · 1 (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/13/2013 8:00:00 AM)

    Sheila Ann Anderson very nice December 11 at 10: 26pm · Unlike · 1 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/13/2013 6:48:00 AM)

    Soumitra Talukder good write! free your wishes!
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  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/13/2013 6:48:00 AM)

    Chito Michael N. Sonti very nice!
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  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/13/2013 6:48:00 AM)

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    Hasmukh Mehta welcome maricris gatchalian, dada aquirre and robin bliss
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  • Gold Star - 9,023 Points Geetha Jayakumar (12/11/2013 8:52:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem with lovely message.

    Let my heart go with message
    With golden ink on fresh page (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,990 Points Babatunde Aremu (12/11/2013 5:53:00 AM)

    Nice poem. Its written from a heart full of desires. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 11, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, December 11, 2013


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