Treasure Island

Ekaterina Polischuk

(20.08.1987)

Why Angels Came...


One day The Lord all Angels sent,
To find some love until World`s end.
He looked at us from Holly Sky
And wanted know why people cry.

The Angels passed through our mind,
They didn`t know if love they find…
A lot of loneliness and pain
They saw all pictures from the brain.

But could not find our hearts` warm
Just saw an influence of corn,
Just felt the doom of our dread,
They saw all dreams we`ve ever had.

They saw all people were just weak,
They just existed, didn`t seek
To find the light, because blind eyes
Could not in heart it recognize.

The angels though they won`t us leave,
Because in saving we believe,
Because we needed them at all,
They did not wait for our fall.

They asked God to send us chance
To stay in love, with angels dance,
To give us warm we`ve lost in fear,
They promised Him of us take care.

So, now all people are not slave,
They reach all dreams their souls crave.
And if they`re lonely, live in tear,
They should remember Angels near.

Submitted: Saturday, March 10, 2012

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  • Binish Cd (3/15/2012 6:15:00 AM)

    very beautiful imagination & rhyming too is good...........well written poem. (Report) Reply

  • Pablo Bautista (3/12/2012 1:23:00 AM)

    wow! ! just to think they pass though my mind, I feel shame of what they could found haha, , but I feel fine to think they are near, , I like your poem, , yes I like it (Report) Reply

  • Harindhar Reddy (3/11/2012 1:31:00 PM)

    What a Magical Stanza is this! I like the poem for it contained lot of hope and has food for the thought for every one young or old.
    They asked God to send us chance
    To stay in love, with angels dance,

    The way this poem was drafted with some mystic power can always inspire us. Hope Kate becomes more popular like William Blake!
    To give us warm we`ve lost in fear,
    They promised Him of us take care. (Report) Reply

  • 1. Floy Dy Ra Floyd Floydson (3/11/2012 9:54:00 AM)

    wow...to stay in love, with angels dance...they passed through our mind, they didn´t know if love they find...they ask God to send us chance...they promised Him of us take care...they did not wait for our fall...because we needed them at all....wonderful..that must been told by an angels at your side :) (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul (3/11/2012 1:02:00 AM)

    the way you write poetry...i like it too much...i wish to write like you....and this poem is full wisdom and the ends with a good note ...i like the poem too much and keep writing. (Report) Reply

  • North Wind (3/11/2012 12:41:00 AM)

    '''And if they`re lonely, live in tear,
    They should remember Angels near.''

    The concluding lines of the poem i like the most....the poem ends with a great note of hope and encouragement....very nice, no, this is, i must say an excellent piece. (Report) Reply

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