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When The Sun Sets On Me

When the sun sets on me
Do not cry or say good bye
As I disappear with the evening shades
To some promised land to bide
Having lived reasonably well
And someday under a different sun
And a different moon...........
We will meet again
To sing and laugh
Relive the past
Restart old coversations
Without having to ever die again
And till then... till then....take care
Live well, die well....adieu......

Submitted: Monday, October 07, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, October 08, 2013


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Some day we will all have to leave all alone........

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  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (12/24/2013 5:12:00 PM)

    Powerful perspective pertaining to life and the after life.

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  • Derrick Fernie (11/16/2013 10:20:00 AM)

    I like it good write!

  • Roseann Shawiak (11/15/2013 2:09:00 AM)

    Beautiful, heart-felt depiction of death. You painted a beautiful picture of it in my mind. A masterpiece.
    Well said. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

  • Savita Tyagi (11/11/2013 2:46:00 PM)

    So beautiful in its amazingly simple way.

  • Anita Sehgal (11/8/2013 2:07:00 AM)

    music for the soul..!

  • Lyn Paul (10/25/2013 11:52:00 PM)

    I can just hear these words as a final farewell at a celebration of ones life. A beautiful ending to a Funeral service. Love the title too. Thank You and I have saved this

  • Heather Wilkins (10/22/2013 12:09:00 PM)

    a lovely god bye. feelings well expressed.

  • Prasanna Kumari (10/15/2013 11:01:00 PM)

    the feelings expressed well...nice poem

  • Neela Nath (10/7/2013 9:25:00 AM)

    The last day must come in our life.Inevitable.Very nice expression and diction as well.

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