krishnakumar chandrasekar nair

Rookie - 457 Points (1964 and doing pretty good.. / Thiruvalla, Kerala)

When The Sun Sets On Me - Poem by krishnakumar chandrasekar nair

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When the sun sets on me
Do not cry or say good bye
As I disappear with the evening shades
To some promised land to bide
Having lived reasonably well
And someday under a different sun
And a different moon...........
We will meet again
To sing and laugh
Relive the past
Restart old coversations
Without having to ever die again
And till then... till then....take care
Live well, die well....adieu......


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Some day we will all have to leave all alone........

Comments about When The Sun Sets On Me by krishnakumar chandrasekar nair

  • Veteran Poet - 1,751 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (12/24/2013 5:12:00 PM)

    Powerful perspective pertaining to life and the after life. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 17,626 Points Roseann Shawiak (11/15/2013 2:09:00 AM)

    Beautiful, heart-felt depiction of death. You painted a beautiful picture of it in my mind. A masterpiece.
    Well said. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,634 Points Savita Tyagi (11/11/2013 2:46:00 PM)

    So beautiful in its amazingly simple way. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anita Sehgal (11/8/2013 2:07:00 AM)

    music for the soul..! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,472 Points Lyn Paul (10/25/2013 11:52:00 PM)

    I can just hear these words as a final farewell at a celebration of ones life. A beautiful ending to a Funeral service. Love the title too. Thank You and I have saved this (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,761 Points Heather Wilkins (10/22/2013 12:09:00 PM)

    a lovely god bye. feelings well expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 210 Points Prasanna Kumari (10/15/2013 11:01:00 PM)

    the feelings expressed well...nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,576 Points Neela Nath (10/7/2013 9:25:00 AM)

    The last day must come in our life.Inevitable.Very nice expression and diction as well. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 7, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 8, 2013


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