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(10 12 1987 / Faisalabad, Pakistan)

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'When Love Strikes'

On the sea shores…
looking forward to sail on more

Our body wrapped by moonlight, rocked
like tidal waves. Rushes gloominess, up and down…..
Hushed these united souls? ? ?
Under the blue sky…
no fear of a prying eye….

In the assembly of stars…
covers the journey of soul in our hearts.
Migrating from a beat to another
indulge in one another’s eye….
from love and care not to shy…

Save that moment in a box, like pirate’s trove…
As possessions packed by a traveler before we go….
We will spend life together, you say
And I... smile
like after rain the rainbow plays with sun rays

As they hit me so warmly
If that moment I blubber with joy…..
Pearls fall on my cheeks, wiped by you,
And I see you...crying too...

You kiss my lips…
I shudder to savor and greedily sip…
Come back o’ girl to reality…..
love isn’t eternal on a chariot of charity…….

Do not mingle your dreams with mine…
Written in sin, oh an unforgivable crime.

What should a man do with his woe?
if healer of your distress become a cruel foe…?
But when love calls silently
the heart still wants more
More….yes more!

Submitted: Monday, May 27, 2013
Edited: Friday, June 07, 2013

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I am very grateful to my dear friends ' Unwritten Soul' & 'Saadat Tahir' to make my poem more beautiful, enchanting & romantic, thank you so much for great contribution of Unwritten Soul & Saadat Tahir

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  • Marva Seaton (7/5/2013 6:04:00 PM)

    This poem was well written. It clearly demonstrates the many different emotions people experience when they are in love.

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  • Heather Wilkins (7/1/2013 5:22:00 PM)

    when love strikes who can stop it. lovely write

  • Ala' Elouri (6/28/2013 11:12:00 AM)

    Nice poem, like the way its enchanting. Check out my poetry. It would be an honor.

  • Sallam Yassin (6/28/2013 11:02:00 AM)

    the flow is too nature
    and the sense is so deep
    (save that moment in box.....)
    the momentum is there...... when the love strikes there and you.... smile/ well done, it's piece of gem

  • Valentine Mbagu (6/27/2013 4:57:00 PM)

    Words born from spells of love.
    A poet born in due season is risen in our mist.

  • Siyabonga a Nxumalo (6/23/2013 11:36:00 AM)

    Well penned poem with goog imagery and a nice flow..
    Siya_! !

  • Tajudeen Shah (6/20/2013 10:21:00 AM)

    To me, your poem is a strange experience now. Usually I try to read the poet's soul over his/her lines. Let me read you again, deeper still, until i find the real gem out of it. God Bless. wait...

  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (6/19/2013 10:54:00 AM)

    unquenchable desire leads to pyre SIN (I call it Satanic in Nature) well penned

  • Patricia Grantham (6/18/2013 6:36:00 AM)

    This is a really beautiful and touching write.
    Two souls coming together in love and
    passion. So eloquently expressed. When love
    strikes it hits very hard especially when there is
    no prying eyes. Lovely.

  • Popeye The Sailor (6/13/2013 10:25:00 AM)

    lovely piece of emotions and feelings...

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