Farah Ilyas

Rookie - 12 Points (10 12 1987 / Faisalabad, Pakistan)

Dilemma


Memories of yours gnawing my mind..
Holds my heart & dispersed on ground..
Everyday this dread, I don’t want to rewind..
But you & your belongings,
Comes to me like unsolicited guest..
Without you, Life is nothing except black & white…
Thorny path, bare footed, eyes burn.
Uncovered head, sobbing heart
Scattered dreams, wistful desires.
Lost path.
Gloomy tale, desperate dawn.
Charmless days & night..
Besides all one thing kept me delight..
Granted patience bright…
Prayers of my hand wide..
Every tickling second my boosting hunt..
In the completion of my deprived…
Ask to God with humility..
Fortified my futurity;
And away all depravity..
When heart feels soothe & calm..
I assume myself..
Flushing of my eyes may pride your burnt …
Will wait, wait & wait until you’re return..

Submitted: Friday, June 28, 2013
Edited: Saturday, June 29, 2013

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  • Gold Star - 5,724 Points Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (10/28/2014 3:13:00 AM)

    Thorny path, bare footed, eyes burn.
    Uncovered head, sobbing heart
    An excellent poem carrying heart and soul along
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 43 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (8/15/2013 6:52:00 AM)

    very nice poem
    full of emotion
    i love the way you write it
    thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,774 Points Ramesh Rai (7/22/2013 11:29:00 PM)

    Without you, Life is nothing except black & white…
    Thorny path, bare footed, eyes burn.
    Uncovered head, sobbing heart
    Scattered dreams, wistful desires
    xlent emotional write, . (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 92 Points C. P. Sharma (7/11/2013 5:19:00 AM)

    You out-poured your heart. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (7/3/2013 11:09:00 AM)

    fine to the core you almost made me cry....speechless (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (7/2/2013 12:41:00 PM)

    a deep emotional poem. lovely (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (7/2/2013 9:49:00 AM)

    Honey, I'm back and I love your poem. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,127 Points Sekharan Pookkat (7/1/2013 11:53:00 AM)

    When heart fells soothe and calm let the poet in you bring us good poems (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 415 Points Yasmeen Khan (7/1/2013 1:42:00 AM)

    Emotional and with feelings so deep and your write expresses such a wild yearning, very passionate write. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,297 Points Soumita Sarkar (6/30/2013 8:03:00 AM)

    Liked the feel........the stranded soul in guise of blessing............keep writing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 175 Points Vizard Dhawan (6/30/2013 7:11:00 AM)

    a beautiful poem same as your mind is so beautiful
    i love all the words that escape your pen
    a master vizard of poetry you are...I, nothing else
    god bless you. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,743 Points Sallam Yassin (6/30/2013 3:47:00 AM)

    you departed
    but still in my heart
    and life became
    my waiting interval
    for u to return to me my life
    and my life is you; Oh my heart/ piece of gem Farah bravo (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,554 Points Dinesh Nair (6/29/2013 9:10:00 AM)

    This dilemma will soon be overcome by you...
    A good sharing indeed... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 267 Points David Wood (6/29/2013 5:16:00 AM)

    A delightful poem, soft and gentle like a summer breeze. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,075 Points Unwritten Soul (6/28/2013 10:26:00 PM)

    Really a beautiful write Farah, you should play around the emotion so you always can understand the words that they have, secretly hidden in them, then use it to lies in your lines...and it will be nicely written then..Great write_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,580 Points Dave Walker (6/28/2013 3:35:00 PM)

    A great poem, like it. A great write. (Report) Reply

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