Neela Nath Das

Walk With Me A While - Poem by Neela Nath Das

Walk with me for a while,
Throw your glum, and please, smile-
Our heaven is not very near.....
See there a grove of pine,
Standing calmly with green shine.
Hold my hand and take me there.
Are you angry? No, chuckle on your face,
I also want life and your tight embrace!
Two ways are there, which one to share?
Ah! the lonely, thready, still lane,
Inviting us, to shed our strain-
Let's walk thru the rain-soaked pine and fir....
For us now, divinity is in everything,
Whatever, exists here, and He does bring-
Nothing is extremely unfair.
So, flash with delight, and take stroll,
Celestial abode of love is our final goal!

Comments about Walk With Me A While by Neela Nath Das

  • Gold Star - 19,413 Points Dr.tony Brahmin (8/27/2015 5:57:00 AM)

    So, flash with delight, and take stroll,
    Celestial abode of love is our final goal! seeking divinity in everything. what a mature thinking. thank you. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 18,448 Points Lyn Paul (8/18/2015 5:37:00 PM)

    A soothing poem with a beautiful title, thank you (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 28,812 Points Kim Barney (8/18/2015 9:19:00 AM)

    Very nice. Congratulations on having it selected as Poem of the Day!

    At first glance I thought the second line said
    Throw away your gum... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,816 Points Ramesh T A (8/18/2015 7:22:00 AM)

    Divinity in the love of surrounding beauty simply makes one excited in a trance nice! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,389 Points Mj Lemon (8/18/2015 1:25:00 AM)

    Divinity is in each line of this poem. A great work, Neela. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 50,292 Points Chinedu Dike (8/12/2015 12:49:00 PM)

    Beautiful! Exquisite! Very romantic love poem elegantly penned with conviction. A well encapsulated piece with lovely rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Neela. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (5/4/2015 1:01:00 PM)

    Once again a Fantastic poem Neela. I liked the lines....

    so flash with delight, and take stroll,
    Celestial abode of love is our final goal!
    Loved reading each lines. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 441 Points Dr Library @ Debadarshi (3/5/2015 10:34:00 AM)

    Beautifully written.....For us now, divinity is in everything..... A must read for the lazy people....they ll walk, I am sure.... enjoyed reading this....thank you.... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,404 Points Valsa George (7/20/2014 7:14:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem...... through the shady grove of pine, tread hand in hand through the untrodden path to the celestial abode of love! Enjoyed! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (6/2/2013 8:04:00 AM)

    beautiful thoughtful well written poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,888 Points Savita Tyagi (7/24/2012 9:32:00 AM)

    Very well written. Loved reading it. 'Nothing is extremely unfair' such are life's workings. Reminded me of my poem 'A Point'. I invite you to read it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 133 Points Allemagne Roßmann (7/14/2012 6:28:00 PM)

    Come back smile for the grimmest-jawed boring finding no interest in love man, written well though i have strong objection as regards the phrase - divinity is in everything-summoned love played well with the words (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kamal N. Baruah (7/14/2012 9:33:00 AM)

    can't express in words how lovely this is......! ! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 525 Points Vipins Puthooran (7/14/2012 4:52:00 AM)

    Celestial abode of love is our final goal!
    excellent poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Robinson (7/13/2012 12:54:00 PM)

    Vivid, sensual, and a new more relaxed and confident poet.Recent poems show a rising star in the east. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kasia Fedyk (7/13/2012 9:20:00 AM)

    Nila, just beautiful, it is so subtle and so much truth as we stand together and walk the path on a heavens cloud. Yes, so beautiful Divinity is in everything. Sublime poem Nila, I love it so much! Love, Kasia (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,987 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (7/13/2012 8:00:00 AM)

    Nothing is extremely unfair...........
    how do you measure matter in quantum?
    as time and space act upon in vector
    nothing is fair or unfair as when relative
    it is gods particle to tell reason of truth, beautiful word of wisdom,10++, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,719 Points Pheko Motaung (7/13/2012 5:16:00 AM)

    A great superb poem by a gifted master poet of our times! Well done and thank you (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 12, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 14, 2012

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