Waiting Eyes Poem by Neela Nath Das

Waiting Eyes

Rating: 5.0


Twilight fell on your
sorrowful waiting eyes!
The snowy field, the horizon
and you, in the solitariness
cherished to hug life with
its warmth and coziness.
No wind to whisper in
your alert ears,
The sound of living world,
was blocked to drown
you in glued stillness.
I read the sadness in your
soft, tender eyes,
waiting not only
for the preys,
but to be hunted
by a beloved huntress!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 11 April 2013

A haunting image of sad but alert eyes. A good write.

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Valsa George 10 April 2013

A moving portait of someone with sad eyes. A haunting image!

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Anil Kumar Panda 09 April 2013

very nice.but to be.....hunted' is beautiful.liked it.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 08 April 2013

A well written poem very softly you wreath Twilight to huntress nice to read

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