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Waiting Eyes

Twilight fell on your
sorrowful waiting eyes!
The snowy field, the horizon
and you, in the solitariness
cherished to hug life with
its warmth and coziness.
No wind to whisper in
your alert ears,
The sound of living world,
was blocked to drown
you in glued stillness.
I read the sadness in your
soft, tender eyes,
waiting not only
for the preys,
but to be hunted
by a beloved huntress!

Submitted: Monday, April 08, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, October 09, 2013


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  • David Wood (4/11/2013 8:16:00 AM)

    A haunting image of sad but alert eyes. A good write.

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  • Thomas A Robinson (4/10/2013 3:08:00 AM)

    A perhaps long cold quest where time is the beast
    to be conquered.

  • Valsa George (4/10/2013 3:00:00 AM)

    A moving portait of someone with sad eyes. A haunting image!

  • Tiku . (4/9/2013 7:04:00 AM)

    very nice.but to be.....hunted' is beautiful.liked it.

  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (4/8/2013 10:03:00 PM)

    A well written poem very softly you wreath Twilight to huntress nice to read

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