Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 3,650 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Visions Of A Lucid Dream


Visions of an eternal light
shining bright in your lucid
dream state mind

Your in another world
that lives inside your own mind
that only wakes up
when you lie down and close your eyes

Open your mind
inside your dream
visit family and friends
in the dream world you have found

See all the wonderful things

Submitted: Saturday, August 24, 2013
Edited: Monday, August 26, 2013

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,542 Points Noreen Carden (9/17/2013 4:35:00 PM)

    Hello Dave this is a lovely poem i dream a lot but in the morning can never remember them.
    Well written (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points The Fallen Leaves Of Mira (8/29/2013 11:44:00 AM)

    A description of my life :)) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,548 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/28/2013 7:31:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem on dreams...
    But I often get horror dreams, only to wake up at midnight and to spend sleepless night.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 339 Points David Wood (8/28/2013 5:03:00 AM)

    I wish I could remember my dreams. I drift off to sleep and the next moment it is morning. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,730 Points Heather Wilkins (8/26/2013 2:38:00 PM)

    my dreams are very few and far apart. I guess too tired to dream good write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Linda Malchak (8/25/2013 7:01:00 PM)

    I've been listening to a lucid dreaming hypnosis podcast at night, hoping to have more control over my dreams. Sometimes I get lucky and it works. Nice words for describing it Dave. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,244 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (8/25/2013 3:11:00 AM)

    my dreams are wildly absurd, Dave, though I would like to have them as you envision. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,940 Points Lorraine Colon (8/24/2013 3:23:00 PM)

    How I wish I could control what I dream about. Most of my dreams are so goofy, they make no sense. I've decided that my mind is like a spring, winding tightly throughout the day. Then when I sleep, it all unwinds, frantically without pattern, thus creating weird thoughts and situations. Okay, you can stop laughing now. I did enjoy your poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 175 Points Vizard Dhawan (8/24/2013 2:53:00 PM)

    i love the way you create scenes and has done a full justice to your poem
    a worth reading piece
    divine poetry (Report) Reply

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