Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 3,781 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

A Drug Infested Mind - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

A lonely baby cries
as her single mother
tries to open her eyes

A drug infested mind
not allowing her to hear
her baby cry

She keeps telling everyone
everything is fine
so she can keep
living the lie
and living the life

Until she opens her eyes
a lonely baby still cries


Comments about A Drug Infested Mind by Dave Alan Walker

  • Bronze Star - 2,563 Points Kewayne Wadley (3/9/2015 2:26:00 AM)

    Short, simplistic, powerful! ! So sad, I feel for the baby (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 22,532 Points Valsa George (2/15/2015 7:29:00 AM)

    Drugs have become the bane of modern man! A mother who is supposed to be all caring has become so numb and insensitive to the needs of her child! How many innocent children are fated to bear the brunt of disregard from their drug addicted parents! A great write! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,925 Points Soulful Heart (10/25/2014 8:49:00 AM)

    the pathetic condition of a drug addict and the unfortunate baby.....no words can b enough to describe the state of this dreadful condition... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,885 Points Heather Wilkins (8/12/2013 5:55:00 PM)

    today society is drug infested. alcohol is just as bad. numbs the mind. this is a world wide problem. good write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,743 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/19/2013 1:32:00 PM)

    Great poem.. It speaks the truth...very well written...... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,091 Points Patricia Grantham (1/12/2013 7:50:00 AM)

    A real good poem, A lesson well taught by this poem, Well written (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 16 Points Trinidad Villafranca (10/2/2012 5:11:00 PM)

    Well written i have seen through the eyes of the child who cries and must say I love it
    Describes the moment that lead up to my poem no memories no pictures
    Until she opens her eyes
    a lonely baby still cries (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 340 Points Captain Cur (8/15/2012 8:13:00 AM)

    Heartfelt and true. Drugs and alcohol
    numb our hearts and souls and we become
    unresponsive and uncaring. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mass Koi (5/25/2012 1:57:00 PM)

    that's a great poem.. i will learn from your poems (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sharad Juneja (4/12/2012 2:33:00 PM)

    Very nice..a message is worth converying (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Firdaus Khan (4/10/2012 5:11:00 AM)

    I agree with you...I like your poem...this is a Great Poem... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points teal Sky (4/4/2012 9:07:00 PM)

    good write.i again like your style of short lines, but meanwhile it also conveys the message aptly. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karen Deeks (3/21/2012 6:33:00 PM)

    Truly, truly... Took my breath and hurt (a compliment) the juxtaposition of possibilities of (t) . Ty dave.. I love the raw emotions of humanity of your writes... Ty.., Karen (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Jennifer Beaugé (3/7/2012 1:07:00 PM)

    I really like this, it speaks the truth... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 349 Points Danny Draper (2/29/2012 4:52:00 AM)

    I have no doubt that this is too often true and also for fathers. A finely written piece concerning a very serious issue. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,925 Points Soulful Heart (2/29/2012 1:22:00 AM)

    Indeed infestation of this poison has been the bane of civic life...........good theme and simply put out..yet touching the right chord.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lusekelo Simwela (2/22/2012 4:50:00 PM)

    wow.... Ths is a great write, wow! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Martin O'Neill (2/16/2012 2:58:00 AM)

    I have seen people close to me die from drugs and know only too well the horror it inflicts on the world. You have caught the cry in the night of the innocent victim. Painfully accurate.
    I wrote about drugs some time ago, the poem was called Tracks. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Michael Lampp (2/12/2012 12:42:00 AM)

    You are really talented. I hope to be able to write like you one day. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Serena Seiler (2/10/2012 2:18:00 PM)

    I totally agree. Also, Katerina i sooooooo agree! ! ! ! ! ! ! Check out my poem its called Another One Of These (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 17, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 17, 2012


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