Dave Alan Walker

(Pudsey, Leeds)

A Drug Infested Mind


A lonely baby cries
as her single mother
tries to open her eyes

A drug infested mind
not allowing her to hear
her baby cry

She keeps telling everyone
everything is fine
so she can keep
living the lie
and living the life

Until she opens her eyes
a lonely baby still cries

Submitted: Tuesday, January 17, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, January 17, 2012

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  • Veteran Poet - 4,935 Points Heather Wilkins (8/12/2013 5:55:00 PM)

    today society is drug infested. alcohol is just as bad. numbs the mind. this is a world wide problem. good write (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,275 Points Trinidad Villafranca (10/2/2012 5:11:00 PM)

    Well written i have seen through the eyes of the child who cries and must say I love it
    Describes the moment that lead up to my poem no memories no pictures
    Until she opens her eyes
    a lonely baby still cries (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 248 Points Captain Cur (8/15/2012 8:13:00 AM)

    Heartfelt and true. Drugs and alcohol
    numb our hearts and souls and we become
    unresponsive and uncaring. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 248 Points teal Sky (4/4/2012 9:07:00 PM)

    good write.i again like your style of short lines, but meanwhile it also conveys the message aptly. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 248 Points Karen Deeks (3/21/2012 6:33:00 PM)

    Truly, truly... Took my breath and hurt (a compliment) the juxtaposition of possibilities of (t) . Ty dave.. I love the raw emotions of humanity of your writes... Ty.., Karen (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 76 Points Danny Draper (2/29/2012 4:52:00 AM)

    I have no doubt that this is too often true and also for fathers. A finely written piece concerning a very serious issue. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,169 Points Soulful Heart (2/29/2012 1:22:00 AM)

    Indeed infestation of this poison has been the bane of civic life...........good theme and simply put out..yet touching the right chord.. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,169 Points Martin O'Neill (2/16/2012 2:58:00 AM)

    I have seen people close to me die from drugs and know only too well the horror it inflicts on the world. You have caught the cry in the night of the innocent victim. Painfully accurate.
    I wrote about drugs some time ago, the poem was called Tracks. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,169 Points Serena Seiler (2/10/2012 2:18:00 PM)

    I totally agree. Also, Katerina i sooooooo agree! ! ! ! ! ! ! Check out my poem its called Another One Of These (Report) Reply

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