Unsaid Poem by Muhammad Ali

Unsaid

Rating: 5.0


I can't pen nothing...
Nothing may be medium
How can I convey!
When silence is the sum...

Sunday, February 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: silence
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
These lines are my inability to answer a friend's question.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 11 February 2018

Even like this, you still pen it beautifully...invisible colour for ears and loud sound for eyes are still silence then... Hope your mind will awaken by wavy ideas as heart rise from stormy feeling so u will be fine to change this silence dear Ali.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 18 February 2018

Sometimes we are speechless with emotion or somethings can't be said or answered. Rhymed wonderful, wry short n says the unsaid. Thumbs up. Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too titled 'song for lunarlovers

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Susan Williams 20 February 2018

Oh, I do love the strength of a few well-chosen words! Perfect! 10+

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Unwritten Soul 05 January 2020

U answered it beautifully, u can write well maybe the sum is not absolute.. :) ;) keep it up

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Susan Williams 25 April 2018

Ha! ! ! I finally got to give you that 10 I was talking about in February! ! !

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Bharati Nayak 19 April 2018

I can't pen nothing... Nothing may be medium How can I convey! When silence is the sum... - - - - - - -Being at a loss of words ! ! ! Soooooo beautiful !

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Mj Lemon 07 April 2018

This is perfection, Ali! When one responds with silence, another is prompted to fill a void. And so that which is nothing, becomes everything. Well done, Ali.

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Susan Williams 20 February 2018

Well, I tried to give you a 10 but all PH does when I vote is to send me to sign in again... and again... and again

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