kanav justa

Veteran Poet - 1,063 Points (Shimla)

Uncontainable Nature - Poem by kanav justa

leaves when touched by autumn
fades to color grey
none can stop them falling
no prayer would make them stay


you cannot seize the night dark
nor can conquer the glittering day
a skylark when forced to sing
goes swiftly away


Comments about Uncontainable Nature by kanav justa

  • Rookie - 118 Points Yash Shinde (4/1/2014 11:29:00 PM)

    ......we humans are so powerful, yet some things exist beyond our control, a beautifully crafted piece Kanav, helds such a great message in few lines! ` (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,634 Points Savita Tyagi (3/23/2014 11:24:00 AM)

    We are little against Nature's rhythm. So much we can not change yet we may enjoy while it lasts. Lovely poem to enjoy. Also glad that you enjoyed one of my poem. Thank you so much. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 408 Points Anthony Burkett (2/8/2014 11:05:00 AM)

    A wonderful segue from nature's indomitable power to the human condition... well penned. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,266 Points Valerie Dohren (2/4/2014 4:51:00 PM)

    Much beauty in a few lines - well done Kanav. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,053 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (2/4/2014 1:18:00 AM)

    Rightly said......Kanav..........Uncontainable Nature beyond our comprehension....well crafted (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,107 Points Geetha Jayakumar (2/3/2014 10:00:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem. Beautiful flow of words, with matching rhythm. Great message it carries, many things are beyond our control, in fact nothing is in our control. Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,008 Points Kavya . (2/3/2014 4:09:00 AM)

    a very nice rhyming poem..enjoyed every line.......... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 96 Points Ruby Mostazir (2/3/2014 2:41:00 AM)

    No words to say...it just touch my heart! 100 & 10 for it :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 379 Points Marie Shine (2/3/2014 2:41:00 AM)

    I like this beautifully penned poem, very much, dear Kanav. You have captured very artistically the things in nature over which a human being has no control. The poem flows so effortlessly in perfect rhythm and rhyme and is finely expressed. A thought provoking write, which I have so enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing. I wish you a very blessed and beautiful day to enjoy! Blessings always... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 20,480 Points Valsa George (2/3/2014 2:04:00 AM)

    We cannot reverse the natural rhythm of life! Though somethings are within man's control, many a happening lies outside his grasp and command! A philosophical write, Kanav! ! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,245 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (2/3/2014 12:51:00 AM)

    a lovely poem, reflective, nicely done. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,954 Points * Sunprincess * (2/1/2014 2:04:00 PM)

    .....a lovely poem with a beautiful metaphor and a great message...
    why so short....I LOVE when you write long poems :)


    Uncontainable Nature

    leaves when touched by autumn
    fades to color grey
    none can stop them falling
    no prayer would make them stay


    you cannot seize the night dark
    nor can conquer the glittering day
    a skylark when forced to sing
    goes swiftly away

    kanav justa (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,542 Points Bill Cantrell (2/1/2014 1:40:00 PM)

    Very nice poem, poems of nature are the best. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 1, 2014



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