Kelsea Osterman


Unborn


You are but a young girl.
A sweet little girl.
Yet you hold my heart.
And you hold my soul.
I love you with all my heart.
And with every ounce of my soul.
You are my reason to get out of bed.
You are my rain and you are my sunshine.
You are the light that is inside me.
You are the girl I always dreamed of.
You are my child.
My flesh and my blood.
I live for you.
I die for you.
You are my world.
You are my darling little girl.

Submitted: Wednesday, March 07, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, March 20, 2012

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  • Kirstin Tafoya (4/15/2013 11:52:00 AM)

    i really enjoyed your poem.. sorry i've taken so long to comment. I hope i'll be as good as you someday :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 217 Points Devin Lasker (3/21/2012 12:03:00 PM)

    I don't think you establish the theme well enough I like the poem but if you are going for the poem talking about an unborn child you might want to make it more clear then just the title. Right now you poem could be taken to just be talking about a mother or father talking about their little girl. Besides that it is a good poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 87 Points Danny Draper (3/15/2012 2:20:00 AM)

    A fantastic positive poem of love and affirmation, for either an idea of a child to come or for a baby waiting to be born. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Brian Skyers (3/7/2012 4:20:00 PM)

    tHIS POEM FLITS FROM HERE TO THERE..i CANT SEE WHAT YOU ARE TRYING TO SAY.
    iS THIS A CHILD? A METAPHORE. A GOOD SEARCH FOR REASON TO LOVE.
    KEEP ON. YOUR INTRO IS\ COULD BE UPSETTING TO ONE THAT IS SOFT DUE TO
    CIRCUMSTANCE.YOU COULD BE JUDGED BEFORE THEYVE READ YOU. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Garrett Binford (3/7/2012 3:45:00 PM)

    Its good. I love it when poets will take their writing as far as I will die for you. It adds emotion. (Report) Reply

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