Khairul Ahsan


To 'The Ocean Of Love'


My poems, perhaps reach you no more,
My words come back from your door,
Unread and unheard.
I pick them up, can't look at their eyes,
Set them free, to fly away to the skies,
My eyes get blurred.

My messages, too, are welcome no more,
They are not eagerly awaited, as before,
With as much ardor.
There is no way that I can call them back,
As their voyage was on a one way track,
So, they'll wait in the harbor............

Of 'The Ocean of Love'!

Submitted: Sunday, November 24, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, November 26, 2013

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  • Rookie - 189 Points Gary H (12/29/2013 9:42:00 PM)

    wow just awesome, so well done sir. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Connie Yost (12/15/2013 4:31:00 AM)

    I sincerely hope your poems and messages and feelings do not have to wait in that vast 'ocean of love' for too long a time. This poem touches the heart and soul, beautifully. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 28 Points Ebi Robert (12/13/2013 5:31:00 AM)

    its beautiful....i like particularly the style. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 851 Points Musfiq Us Shaleheen (12/10/2013 12:04:00 AM)

    very stirring poem...longing me very..nicely done 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 58 Points Susy Evelyne (12/7/2013 2:38:00 PM)

    Poignantly lovely. It's sad when meaningful words fall on barren land - or a huge ocean, as you see it here. But i like the parallel with the harbour - sign of optimism, too. Excellent poem, worthy of a ten. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,243 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (12/4/2013 2:02:00 AM)

    one way track, yes, surely, love knows only to give.
    lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 53 Points Cassandra Jasmine (12/2/2013 12:12:00 PM)

    Passionate. Clear. Perfect! I really liked it. Despite the fact that it's short, the message is clear. A ten from me! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,258 Points Khairul Ahsan (12/1/2013 7:41:00 AM)

    @ Valsa George,
    Thank you very much for this beautiful interpretation of my poem. I am inspired by your thoughtful words. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,307 Points Valsa George (12/1/2013 6:59:00 AM)

    At times our words come back to us unread or unheard! That's painful! But still let them loose...! Don't chain them! You may see them safely anchored in some harbour in the ocean of love! Sharp and poignant write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,258 Points Khairul Ahsan (11/30/2013 10:50:00 AM)

    @Yasmeen Khan,
    Thanks a lot! Thanks for appreciating the passion. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,258 Points Khairul Ahsan (11/30/2013 10:48:00 AM)

    @ Morose Mermaid,
    Thank you so much for these inspiring words! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 415 Points Yasmeen Khan (11/30/2013 9:00:00 AM)

    very passionate poem......written nicely (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Morose Mermaid (11/26/2013 12:43:00 AM)

    Melancholic, heart touching in one word 'Lovely'... beautiful write... good read indeed.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,258 Points Khairul Ahsan (11/25/2013 2:10:00 AM)

    @ Beauteous Victory,
    I am so pleased!
    Thank you.
    Poets write to reach out to people. You've honored me. (Report) Reply

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