Khairul Ahsan


To 'The Ocean Of Love'


My poems, perhaps reach you no more,
My words come back from your door,
Unread and unheard.
I pick them up, can't look at their eyes,
Set them free, to fly away to the skies,
My eyes get blurred.

My messages, too, are welcome no more,
They are not eagerly awaited, as before,
With as much ardor.
There is no way that I can call them back,
As their voyage was on a one way track,
So, they'll wait in the harbor............

Of 'The Ocean of Love'!

Submitted: Sunday, November 24, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, November 26, 2013

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  • Rookie Connie Yost (12/15/2013 4:31:00 AM)

    I sincerely hope your poems and messages and feelings do not have to wait in that vast 'ocean of love' for too long a time. This poem touches the heart and soul, beautifully. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 58 Points Susy Evelyne (12/7/2013 2:38:00 PM)

    Poignantly lovely. It's sad when meaningful words fall on barren land - or a huge ocean, as you see it here. But i like the parallel with the harbour - sign of optimism, too. Excellent poem, worthy of a ten. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 27 Points Cassandra Jasmine (12/2/2013 12:12:00 PM)

    Passionate. Clear. Perfect! I really liked it. Despite the fact that it's short, the message is clear. A ten from me! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,213 Points Khairul Ahsan (12/1/2013 7:41:00 AM)

    @ Valsa George,
    Thank you very much for this beautiful interpretation of my poem. I am inspired by your thoughtful words. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,246 Points Valsa George (12/1/2013 6:59:00 AM)

    At times our words come back to us unread or unheard! That's painful! But still let them loose...! Don't chain them! You may see them safely anchored in some harbour in the ocean of love! Sharp and poignant write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Morose Mermaid (11/26/2013 12:43:00 AM)

    Melancholic, heart touching in one word 'Lovely'... beautiful write... good read indeed.. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,213 Points Khairul Ahsan (11/25/2013 2:10:00 AM)

    @ Beauteous Victory,
    I am so pleased!
    Thank you.
    Poets write to reach out to people. You've honored me. (Report) Reply

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