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Khairul Ahsan

A Gentle Touch

When you touch me, I can say it's you
Even if my eyes are closed.
For your palms are like text books
That I've read so many times over,
And so they appear so familiar.

When your breath falls on my back,
I can say it's you, without turning around,
For my back has known no other warmth.
All know a soft touch gives goosebumps,
Who knows a silent breath too can do that?

When we hold each other lip locked,
Our tongues do the talking and explore
Like an adventurer to an unknown land.
No force can open your closed eye lids,
Until the tongue talking is over.

A gentle touch, yes a gentle touch!
Can spark two bodies afire.
Neither wants it to remain gentle,
As they want to explode in unison,
And gently cool like an extinguishing fire.

Submitted: Thursday, July 04, 2013
Edited: Monday, August 11, 2014

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Your touch is warm, your touch can calm.

04 July 2013
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  • Khairul Ahsan (5/5/2014 10:55:00 PM)

    @ Ruma Chaudhuri,
    Thanks for liking my poem and leaving an appreciative comment here. I am inspired. (Report) Reply

  • Ruma Chaudhuri (4/21/2014 9:49:00 AM)

    Excellent poem. Romantic and a feeling of true love. Thanks of sharing this beautiful poem. Ruma (Report) Reply

  • Hira Akhtar (4/20/2014 6:54:00 AM)

    OMG, tis so romantic ;)
    Sorry, I was A beautiful poem indeed about the chemistry of two very closely related persons having such a pure relation without any fear :)
    have a good time :)
    hira (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (4/12/2014 10:31:00 AM)

    @Tanya Ivanova
    Thank you very much for reading my poem and commenting on it. Your appreciation has inspired me.
    Please do not forget to rate the poems while you put your comments. (Report) Reply

  • Tanya Ivanova (4/11/2014 11:15:00 AM)

    Beautiful feeling. I have always preferred poetry with rhyme and rhythm, white poems are prose with structure of a poem, but they lack the music, however it is also art (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (4/8/2014 11:15:00 AM)

    @Yash Shinde
    Thank you very much for reading my poem and leaving your comment here. Thanks for the appreciation, I appreciate! (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (4/8/2014 7:31:00 AM)

    @Ahmed Abomahfouz
    Thank you very much for reading my poem and leaving your comments there. Thanks a lot for the appreciation and many more thanks for including it in your list of favorite poems. (Report) Reply

  • Yash Shinde (4/8/2014 6:58:00 AM)

    a gentle touch.the touch that sends butterflies through your emotional, beautiful write.................... (Report) Reply

  • Ahmed Abomahfouz (3/1/2014 2:37:00 AM)

    you have also a magic touches in every verse of the poem. the idea of the poem is creative too and you presented it in a way full of emotions and have have the suspense.
    you played this peace of art very successfully
    choosing it as one of my favuorite poems (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (2/23/2014 12:25:00 PM)

    @Amitava Sur,
    Thanks for reading my poem and liking it. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (1/3/2014 8:05:00 PM)

    @Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon,
    Thank you very much for reading my poem and leaving your well thought comment here.
    I am inspired. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (12/28/2013 8:12:00 PM)

    @ Beach Girl,
    Thanks for reading my poem and commenting on it.
    'I love how this poem begins with subtle passionate feelings, but then suddenly ignites into something more. Loved it, '
    You are right, the passion increased profoundly, and suddenly.
    May be I had felt like that while I was writing the poem.
    Thanks for the nice words and the generous 10/10. (Report) Reply

  • Beach Girl (12/28/2013 12:47:00 PM)

    I love how this poem begins with subtle passionate feelings, but then suddenly ignites into something more. Loved it, gave it a 10 (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (11/4/2013 8:59:00 PM)

    @Beauteous Victory,
    Thanks for your high praise, am truly inspired!
    Is this an eye catcher? Didn't catch too many eyes in seven months. Only ten pairs of eyes seem to have read this and as many souls have left some words behind. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (11/1/2013 8:17:00 AM)

    @ Ivana Radan-jamnicki, Thanks for sharing your feelings about the poem. I am glad to have your feedback.
    Please also the rate the poem. (Report) Reply

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