ramesh rai

Gold Star - 11,654 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

Thirst Of Soul

Life is the eternal thirst of entity soul
desires for a pervasive blooming life
to dwell in life life long
to enjoy fantasy of life
precisive allurement mingle the life
makes to dwell in despite of thousand perplexities
encounters trouble
gets rid of troubles

soul which is invisible
only an imagination
monitor the life
performs for the life

life without soul is dead
that so, always desires to exist
unless discharging all duties of life

life is a mirth for the soul
life comes life goes
but soul passes all the way

Submitted: Monday, August 12, 2013
Edited: Monday, August 26, 2013

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  • Gold Star - 22,355 Points Akhtar Jawad (8/20/2014 4:03:00 AM)

    life is a mirth for the soul
    life comes life goes
    but soul passes all the way
    A beautiful poem with a great message. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (8/29/2013 6:00:00 PM)

    life is a mirth for the soul life comes life goes but the soul passes all the way. excellent thought (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,042 Points Hazel Durham (8/20/2013 9:40:00 AM)

    Eternal soul that brings harmony and reason to our lives with truth and a promise of days of happiness!
    Beautiful write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 415 Points Yasmeen Khan (8/14/2013 11:10:00 AM)

    Human soul is eternal and life is so exciting, attractive that rarely any one wants to die.We want to live life to its fullest. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/14/2013 5:57:00 AM)

    Life comes and goes but what remains is Soul...Fantastic poem..Life must be lived as its God's gift...Loved reading it.. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,047 Points Valerie Dohren (8/13/2013 11:54:00 AM)

    Life without soul is dead - my favourite line, and for everyone else it seems. Very true, if we have no soul then we are not alive. Very good write Ramesh. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,614 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/13/2013 8:06:00 AM)

    Life without soul is dead
    Powerful indeed. It defines living dead. Life must be lived. Nice poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 318 Points Poetheart Morgan (8/13/2013 7:45:00 AM)

    The thirst of the soul is to be able to express itself freely in communion with the mind and body. It knows everything and the mind is always the great opponent.
    Go away the body and remains the soul. Free to learn again. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Aswath Raman (8/13/2013 3:04:00 AM)

    Lives are mere days of a soul and darkness is the death. And soul lives forever. A nice write sir! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,104 Points Valsa George (8/13/2013 1:03:00 AM)

    Yes Ramesh, man without soul is reduced to just pounds of flesh! An irrefutable truth! ! A beautiful write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 363 Points Rekha Mandagere (8/12/2013 9:31:00 PM)

    The message life is mortal where as spirit or soul is eternal which is passed on to others. It is beautifully written. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,665 Points Wahab Abdul (8/12/2013 8:31:00 PM)

    ''life without soul is dead '' excellent line....very lovely.. (Report) Reply

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