The Night Poem by Fatima Nusairat

The Night

Rating: 4.8


The night, give's me, the silence..
And..
Whispered the trees..,
River flow..!
,
Night is a friend of my Loneliness.., ,
While whining of the sky
Grows in the water..!
As for me..
I walk behind my footsteps such as idiotic..,
Do desertion hiding, behind indifference..? !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fatima Nusairat 30 May 2013

Patricia Grantham Thanx my dear for your comment and like

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Patricia Grantham 30 May 2013

The night time has it's own special qualities. Gives us time to think about the events of the day. Night time is the right time. A nice write.

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Fatima Nusairat 27 May 2013

Thanx Aftab, Tiku..thanx my friend

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 27 May 2013

See, this poem gives a message particularly the concluding....once someone said or read A dog runs behind a dog till the dog ahead stops and barks...very good lines with the imagery 9...read my poem if have time then

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Anil Kumar Panda 27 May 2013

very nice. eeriness of night is vivid here.liked it.

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