Sunrise Poem by Valerie Dohren

Sunrise

Rating: 4.3


Where earth meets sky, around the world
A golden thread is softly curled
And then from sleep thus slowly torn
The angel of the day is born

To herald yet another dawn

Encircling all with dazzling rings
As phoenix-like he spreads his wings
And so unveils his gleaming light
Shining, incandescent, bright

To steal the shadows of the night

And clouds aflame with burning glow
With red and amber lit below -
There scarce could be more beauteous play
Than when the night turns into day

And when the dark is chased away

For at the rising of the sun
Another day has yet begun
Another day, your way to find
Another day within your mind

Another day... are you still blind?

Step, step, step this way
Into the brightness of the day
Into the world of beauteous play
After the dark is chased away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Walterrean Salley 05 March 2012

Valerie, thanks for the lovely invitation. This is such an inspiring poem. (I’m glad I chose this one to read.) Very uplifting, enlightening and revealing. I smiled and grinned as I read - it was just that delightful. Please continue your incredible gift. I’ve enjoyed my visit, and will certainly be visiting your field again.

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Danny Draper 06 March 2012

This is a nice poem with a deeper meaning and a message repeated every day until it sinks in.

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Eric Cockrell 06 March 2012

gives one the strength to get up, and go! good poetry!

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Robert Green 06 March 2012

Thank you for reminding us of the beauty of a new day, as everyday life gets in the way. Wonderful poem yet again. You have a great talent Valerie. Another of yours I have saved to favourites :)

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Dave Walker 07 March 2012

A very beautiful poem, like it. A great write.

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Linda May Fox 20 June 2012

I like this. The way you've written it and the way it flows.

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Hazel Connelly 17 April 2012

A beautiful poem, just lovely thank you.

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Saiom Shriver 30 March 2012

a truly sublime poem... I added it to my favorites thank you

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Tim Stensloff 18 March 2012

I really like this one. I like that hook you have of repeating the word 'beauteous, ' and, also, the scene you paint for us shines through really vibrantly, vivid as a good watercolor. It almost makes me want to wake up in the early morning tomorrow to watch the sunrise.

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Martin O'Neill 16 March 2012

Oh Valerie, this was a beautiful way to start my day! Perfect metre, a lyrical gentle walk into a new dawn. Love it.

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