Sun Sand Sea Poem by ONElia AVElar
Sun Sand Sea
Honey from the sky,
sugar under feet,
warm turquoise tea.
I let my senses revel in
a territory of tranquility.
In modern temples
of sun, sand and sea,
where all believers,
all tourists-pilgrims
lie almost nude
instead of going
down on knees.
I joined the multitude
becoming follower
of antique Epicurus'
school in Greece.
Your style is musical and the turquoise tea is dainty 10 and more stars
The rhythmic flow of your poem is subtly and confidently dealt with ease in this highly gay poem that is spiritually engaging. Thanks, arya
What a joy to receive poetic news from Onelia! I find her in this spiritual, marine and sunny Greece and I recognize her Authoress to whom I would have many things to say. Greece lives in the myths of those who love it
simply hedonistic and spiritually profound with its connection to the free spirit. and life's basic needs...good poem..
I dont like this poem. It doesnt make that much sense and the alluding could be prettier with its vagueness.
A beautiful poem with such nice pleasant words befitting to the poem. I liked it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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11/26/2024 1:47:56 PM # 1.0.0
the first three lines paint sun sand and sea beautifully...the susequent lines dance in rhyme... words tea/sea...knees/greece...dinging donging...poem ten grade