ONElia AVElar

Rookie - 12 Points (Bulgaria)

Sun Sand Sea


Honey from the sky,
sugar under feet,
warm turquoise tea.
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  • Freshman - 1,403 Points Kay Staley (9/29/2014 10:18:00 AM)

    I dont like this poem. It doesnt make that much sense and the alluding could be prettier with its vagueness. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Max Kuvaev (3/8/2009 9:24:00 AM)

    I like it very much. I always like when there's a splinter that makes a happy picture somewhat sad... A beatiful poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tsira Goge (12/18/2008 12:54:00 PM)

    Hello onelia, Beautiful poems... A fantastic trip to Greece... 10........
    Thanks for fine words...
    Kindest regards,
    Tsira (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Coach Roth (9/7/2008 1:10:00 AM)

    How did I miss this one? Beautiful...has a flow that gives it the right amount of erotic and sensual pleasure...love it...Coach (Report) Reply

  • Rookie , aryaindia (8/26/2008 6:04:00 AM)

    The rhythmic flow of your poem is subtly and confidently dealt with ease in this highly gay poem that is spiritually engaging. Thanks, arya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 62 Points Kesav Easwaran (8/11/2008 11:58:00 AM)

    the first three lines paint sun sand and sea beautifully...the susequent lines dance in rhyme... words tea/sea...knees/greece...dinging donging...poem ten grade (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Original Unknown Girl (8/4/2008 4:01:00 AM)

    Sigh.... delicious and just a slight bit of erotica thrown in (or is that my dirty mind? LOL!) . Your descriptives of a wonderful hot country make me yearn to return to dip my toes in its waters.... HG: -) xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 35 Points Donall Dempsey (8/3/2008 5:19:00 AM)

    I am letting my senses revel in your toughts...indulging in your words. Warm turquoise tea is such a beauiful phrase in itself.

    love Donall Donall (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Emancipation Planz (8/3/2008 2:17:00 AM)

    Mamma Mia.... wish i was there at the same time you were there... SIGH you made me remember (but I will not tell) .. aroha xxzzzz (Report) Reply

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