Stillborn Poem by Valerie Dohren

Stillborn

Rating: 4.3


(A mother`s lament)

Oh rest your head my little one
Upon a silken cloud
And may the angels cradle you
Wrapped in a golden shroud

In love, I bore your tiny form
So pure, so calm, so still
And gazed upon your precious face
My dreams n`er to fulfil

I ached to see the breath of life
To hear the sweetest cry
Rise up within your silent breast
Yet still you there did lie

I held you tightly in my arms
Pressed close against my heart
Then wept an avalanche of tears
To know that we must part

And as the years pass by, my child,
Your mem`ry will remain
No-one will ever understand
This everlasting pain

You`ll always be a part of me
A gift from heaven above
And `though I`ll never hold your hand
You`ll always have my love

So rest your head my little one
Upon a silken cloud
Within my dreams I`ll cradle you
Wrapped in your golden shroud

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Draper 27 February 2012

Valerie, You said this was not autobiographical and I am glad of that. However, what a beautiful poem and a well crafted and loving and delicate piece. Love sleeps eternal in that silent heart.

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Marlon Janaway 28 February 2012

So much of our lives depend on the happiness of our children.no one knows grief like the mother who has lost her newborn.i feel that this poem was written with great tenderness and real empathy.it never ceases to amaze me, how tragedy can illuminate the beauty within the human spirit.

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Joseph Anderson 08 May 2012

Perhaps your sweet, flowing poetry has been enhanced by the stings of fate-A tragic lament but needed

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Linda May Fox 20 June 2012

Very sad but lovely!

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Meena Mustafa 29 June 2012

This poem literally made me cry. A beautiful write but a very sad one. Thanks for sharing.

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Sylvia Lukeman 22 April 2017

Dear Valerie Dohren, Your poem, Stillborn is so beautifully, tenderly written This reader will think of it many times warmest wishes, Sylvia Lukeman

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Marshall E Gass 09 April 2014

Very poignant poem which carries all of the emotions of loss. With the use of rhyme and rhythm the poetess has surpassed quality by managing intricate details within the tight framework. I love the poem. Thank you for inviting me to read your version of these tragic events. I will cherish this poem too. Hop to read more of your work when I find some moments to read through. Lovely work Valerie. Well done.

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Heather Wilkins 24 August 2013

this is a very emotional touching write. just beautiful Valerie. I fell the hurt of the poet. each stanza is a story within its self. great work

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Stevie Taite 07 January 2013

Tears falling, Valerie. So sad! X a deeply touching poem. X

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Meena Mustafa 01 July 2012

I am speechless.... a beautiful poem.

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