Staying Power Poem by Julie Smith

Staying Power

Rating: 5.0


I'm the Queen of the bad examples
In the dance team I fall out of line
I don't walk, I trip and I stumble
And the grand prize never was mine

I may not be the first at the finish line
I always make the same mistake twice
I never listen to my own advice
But I got staying power and I'll be just fine

Friday, March 3, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: awkwardness,power,self discovery,strength,strong
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I may not be the first at the finish line (again) , but I have the greatest staying power.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 March 2017

ur just 23 all by now know hence your poem is fresh also do read and reply comments if you wish to do so improve others staying power also ur poetry is lovely @1994 born maybe 21 Mar 1994

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Chuy Amante 03 March 2017

YOu got what it takes! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Tom Allport 03 March 2017

a god loves a trier poem? it's the taking part that counts! well written.

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