Stupid Girl Poem by Julie Smith

Stupid Girl

Rating: 4.2


I was a stupid girl
Egoistic and dumb
Put myself first
I was feeling numb

A promise to change
I made up my mind
And I am sorry
I was too blind

In all the past years
I thought I was cool
Didn't notice I was
Just being a fool

All I wanted
Was some luck on my side
To make me feel better
Didn't get it right

I acted like I had
Nothing to lose
Time was on my side
Until I lost you

That's what you get
For feeling too fly
Don't hold your head
Too high in the sky

Who will believe me
See through the lies
Please don't walk away
When I apologize

I don't do it for show
I mean it, it's true
Now all I want to do
Is to make it up to you!

Thursday, August 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: apology,change,feeling guilty,honesty,sorry,truth,wisdom
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote it during my darkest time... A quick write in 5 minutes. What you learn in a year...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Billsborough 29 September 2016

By no means stupid. Sometimes we make misjudgments, especially in our youth, but even we oldies aren't immune. Love the idea of the poem and very well expressed too. I think maybe the object of your ardour didn't try hard enough.

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Paul Amrod 04 August 2016

Hi Julie, Stupid Girl from the Rolling Stones Is a song you have to hear. It was simple but grooves like a rocket. Reminds of when I was only 14. Lots of fun listening to it. Thanks for all your new poetry. I am enjoying reading all of it. Greetings, Paul

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Paul Amrod 05 August 2016

Hi Julie, Have fun with your next poetic adventure, Warm regards, Paul

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Julie Smith 05 August 2016

Thank you so much Paul and that is awesome! Thanks a lot for telling me :) All the best to you too x

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Paul Amrod 05 August 2016

Hi Julie, I listened to them after I read your poem last night. Wow you are very creative in this month of August. Let the muse fly into your creative mind and inspire with poetical thoughts.All the best, Paul

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Julie Smith 05 August 2016

Hi Paul, thanks a lot and I'm honoured you take the time to read my poems :) And that's so cool, I know this song, the Rolling Stones are in fact one of my favourite bands! Thank you again x

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 August 2016

'Love means never having to say you're sorry' and yes we all learn but gradually

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 August 2016

ok

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Julie Smith 05 August 2016

That's so true and thanks a lot :)

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