Spread Thin We Are..... [ Keeping In Touch With Other Poets & Their Poems On P H; Short ] Poem by Bri Edwards

Spread Thin We Are..... [ Keeping In Touch With Other Poets & Their Poems On P H; Short ]

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Loke Kok yee, how art thee? ?
I guess,2 U, it's so plain to see..
that I have paid little heed to you,
of late, and vice versa is in fact true,

..unless you've read, but don't tell..
that you read my stuff & love it well.
My guess is we are both 'Spread Thin',
aka "have too little time"!We can't win...

........ the never-ending battle 'gainst time! !
Did U notice that I still can make lines rhyme?

(July....1.....2018)

Sunday, July 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: communication
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i was thinking recently of Lok Koke yee {"Bro" to me} and other PH 'friends' who i have not "read" or heard from recently. yes, we (all i think)have other things to do [like eat ice cream, and sleep, and even die], AND other friends (for goodness sake) .i hope no one is too sad due to my infrequent "communication". but "it" IS a "two-way street"! !

ha ha.

bri :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 01 July 2018

Communication makes the path clear and motivate us to walk together. Having little time for each other is nice. Thinking about a friend like Lok Koke yee is really wonderful. We are missing him now and we hope he will come soon. Thank you for sharing your nice poem that touches heart...10

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Khairul Ahsan 12 August 2018

Loved the title - 'Spread Thin We Are.....' - it's so true! Thanks for presenting a nice poem.

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Khairul Ahsan 12 August 2018

Thanks for the 'Poet's Notes'. Yes, communication is a two way traffic and I happily observe that you hardly fail to visit someone's page who has visited yours.

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Bharati Nayak 06 July 2018

Yes, Loke Koke Yee's new poems and comments I am missing too.Hope he will respond quickly to your friendship..

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Savita Tyagi 02 July 2018

No doubt spread thin we are but still hanging on. May be online friendships are also addictive! Great two poems I read on your page today.. haven’t reached to July collection yet.

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Kelly Kurt 01 July 2018

Lok is a dear friend of mine as well. It may be that he is otherwise preoccupied. I have not seen a post in a while. His comments are always well thought out and poetically witty.

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