Treasure Island

JENIE FRANKSAY

(07 august 1996 / samastipur)

Sorry & Thank You


sorry
that i gave lovely glances
to you everyday.
sorry
that i talked to you
in a nice way.
sorry
i am responsible for your
misunderstanding.
sorry
i gave you pain,
your longing went in vain.

thankyou
for being helpful
in every circumstance.
thankyou
for valueing my glance.
not valued by others though.
thankyou
for bearing my rudeness
which have hurt you.
thankyou
for revenge you took,
by not giving me even a last look.

Submitted: Tuesday, June 25, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, June 25, 2013

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  • Khairul Ahsan (7/2/2013 10:18:00 PM)

    Sorry and Thank You, the three beautiful words so nicely used. A very straight forward and touching poem. Very much liked the comments of Don Nguyen and quite agree with him. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (6/28/2013 10:48:00 AM)

    Thanks and Sorry are two words that we must use often, in this beautiful write i can say i give you claps..do write more_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Don Nguyen (6/25/2013 6:11:00 AM)

    The person you wrote seem s like a sweet man who really cares for you.
    I dont think it was a revenge, his last look on you probably had pieved his heart as well.
    I hope Revenge is simply poetic expression and you didnt mean it.
    Your poem sounds so sweet and loving though, I love it. (Report) Reply

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