Rookie - 187 Points (07 august 1996 / samastipur)

Back To Me - Poem by JENIE FRANKSAY

its the ultimate day.
i haven't imagined that
our friendship will end this way.
you said 'its end'.
you said 'bye forever'
ohh friend..

i want to cry
but tears have dried up.
whats my fault? tell me why?

i believe in miracles,
i trust almighty.
one day i know
you will be back to me.

Poet's Notes about The Poem

for my once very close friend.
we are still friends but the charm is lost.
we had quarrel & not properly sorted out yet.

Comments about Back To Me by JENIE FRANKSAY

  • Rookie - 421 Points Shania K. Younce (10/5/2013 4:06:00 PM)

    What a very pretty poem. You've caught my eye. Bien! Well done. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 213 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (7/7/2013 2:45:00 PM)

    You must know that problems are guidelines not stop signs, both of you. In life you sometimes fight with your loved ones, its natural and doesn't mean you don't love each other but pride is a problem and fools live a solitery lives because of pride, be wise and swallow your pride and sort things out with your dear friend.
    Nice poem.
    Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 22 Points Tripsha Ghosh (7/4/2013 1:03:00 AM)

    Heart touching love it (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,083 Points Heather Wilkins (7/1/2013 3:02:00 PM)

    sometimes friendship can end this way. return to yesterday is good (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~ Jenie~ (6/27/2013 11:14:00 PM)

    hope you get back the friend
    nice poetry (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Survi Sharma (6/25/2013 1:20:00 PM)

    so sad to your friend
    do you patch up now dear (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 184 Points Vizard Dhawan (6/25/2013 7:54:00 AM)

    paining and longing i have felt over the poem (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,265 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (6/25/2013 4:24:00 AM)

    Pains produce poems. Keep up your lovely write Jenie. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,543 Points Gajanan Mishra (6/25/2013 4:14:00 AM)

    I trust almighty, good poem, thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 25, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 25, 2013

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