Valerie Dohren

Silver Star - 4,225 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Sonnet - I (O Shall You Love Me Through My Mellowed Years) - Poem by Valerie Dohren

O shall you love me through my mellowed years
When I am no more as the rising sun
As less my visage to your heart endears -
The sweetness age thus ever has undone
And wilt thou fix your smile upon my face
Enjoin your fingers with my weathered hand
Then in your arms yet tenderly embrace
As if my life all time had never spanned
Or shall the years so meet with your disdain
As when you look upon this ag'ed brow
O shall you not see beauty there again
Or know once more the joys that youth endow
I pray that love may ever so endure
Unblemished by the years forever more


Comments about Sonnet - I (O Shall You Love Me Through My Mellowed Years) by Valerie Dohren

  • Rookie - 415 Points Captain Cur (4/20/2013 9:55:00 AM)

    softly speaks the trials of love's refrain
    what's bound by youth may wizened age retain. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 876 Points Mary Forrester (3/5/2013 3:49:00 PM)

    Heart felt and beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 337 Points Dee Corpolongo (2/21/2013 7:51:00 AM)

    A very beautiful and warm sonnet, written by a warm and beautiful poet, Val.
    I love the words forevermore.....such deeply felt meaning it does endure.... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,999 Points Neela Nath Das (2/17/2013 9:37:00 AM)

    ab, ab, cd, cd, ef, ef, gg is the rhyme-scheme.Bearing the same fragrance like Shakespeare and Petrarch.Very beautiful! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 21,957 Points * Sunprincess * (2/16/2013 7:07:00 PM)

    dear Valerie, I believe true love will love always,
    but finding true love isn't so easy...fabulous write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 445 Points Danny Draper (2/5/2013 5:25:00 AM)

    A fine sonnet, and as explored the heart sees that which it desires, and in seeing, enduring love is oblivious to that desired in youth realising it is only truely endowed by maturity. A lovely classic structure and form. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 445 Points Danny Draper (2/5/2013 5:25:00 AM)

    A fine sonnet, and as explored the heart sees that which it desires, and in seeing, enduring love is oblivious to that desired in youth realising it is only truely endowed by maturity. A lovely classic structure and form. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Kelvin Owusu (1/23/2013 4:54:00 AM)

    an excellent read, great poem (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,458 Points Unwritten Soul (1/21/2013 9:12:00 AM)

    Peace is the melody that flows from your hand_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,930 Points Dave Walker (1/21/2013 4:25:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem, age is just a number, I love my partner more each day. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 94 Points Jahan Zeb (1/20/2013 7:03:00 AM)

    Beautiful. Very lovely. Rhythmic, rhyming and has a beautiful flow. you have succeeded in giving your old days eternity. this really is a heartfelt write. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,107 Points Diane Hine (1/20/2013 4:19:00 AM)

    Beautiful traditional sonnet. Mellowed years and weathered hands sound almost desirable. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,279 Points Shahzia Batool (1/20/2013 2:05:00 AM)

    @ Valsa George...
    very right! ... a very neat shakespearean composition in the same meaningful 3 stanzas with alternate rhyme and a couplet is now producing a desire to have more of the same traditional flavour...i love not only Shakespearean sonnets, but preferably Shakespeare's own sonnets too...Love is not love which alters when it alteration finds! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,282 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (1/19/2013 2:08:00 AM)

    True love has no face it resides in the heart, the part that never grows old. It is eternal youth that the one feels inside with true love and without that love surely withers and dies. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Www. Poemhunter.com/m-d-dinesh-nair-2 (1/19/2013 2:06:00 AM)

    The appeal is clear and candid and this man in the sonnet will hopefully stand by you ever, be assured Valerie. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,528 Points Valsa George (1/18/2013 11:58:00 PM)

    Like the Shakesperean sonnets, it seems that you have in mind a series of sonnets.(Shakespeare wrote over 156 sonnets) . Sonnet No1 is beautiful and we readers can look forward to equally good ones in the coming days! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,213 Points Lyn Paul (1/18/2013 8:14:00 PM)

    Really BeAUtiful. Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Heather Wilson (1/18/2013 3:54:00 PM)

    True love weathers all, a really beautiful romantic sonnet (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Stevie Taite (1/18/2013 8:36:00 AM)

    Beautiful Val. I think I have leaky eyes again. Your poems so often evoke emotions in me (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,999 Points Neela Nath Das (1/18/2013 7:52:00 AM)

    A nice sonnet on love. Really, I learn from you always! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 18, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, January 18, 2013


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