Valerie Dohren

Silver Star - 3,515 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Sonnet - Ii (I Pray You Shall Not Leave Me In The Spring) - Poem by Valerie Dohren

I pray you shall not leave me in the Spring
Nor yet in Autumn ever to depart
I could not bear to hear the sweet birds sing
If then you chose to break my tender heart
I beg you do not leave in Summertime
When all the flowers be in fullest bloom
O leave me not in Winter's icy clime
For then, my love, would ever be too soon
And when the bright sun rises every day
So too when evening shadows soft descend
‘Tis then I ask that you will ever stay
That our sweet love may never yet thus end
O leave me when my heart has turned to stone
For then, my love, I deem to be alone


Comments about Sonnet - Ii (I Pray You Shall Not Leave Me In The Spring) by Valerie Dohren

  • Rookie - 340 Points Captain Cur (4/20/2013 10:33:00 AM)

    With what picks of love must I deeply bore
    seasoned heart, that has coldly closed your door. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 798 Points Mary Forrester (3/5/2013 3:45:00 PM)

    I love it, very moving Valerie. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,311 Points * Sunprincess * (2/23/2013 9:16:00 PM)

    dear Valerie, your heart shall never turn to stone,
    so we shall never have to worry of your love leaving...
    love this fabulous write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stevie Taite (2/23/2013 10:40:00 AM)

    And exhale................. My next assignment I think is going to be a sonnet. They are much trickier than you make them look. Always your pen flows with such ease and such grace! Inspirational my lovely lady. (I have missed reading you.) x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 402 Points Danny Draper (2/5/2013 5:36:00 AM)

    Another fine effort and I agree with Diane Hine regarding the last 2 lines, as a sonnet with that twist at the end is a splendid thing and adds a great finale of uncertain or different direction as achieved here. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 402 Points Danny Draper (2/5/2013 5:34:00 AM)

    Another fine effort and I agree with Diane Hine regarding the last 2 lines, as a sonnet with that twist at the end is a splendid thing and adds a great finale of uncertain or different direction as achieved here. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 38 Points Ruby Honeytip (1/26/2013 8:49:00 PM)

    Love this Val [3 Very tenderly and intelligently written. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Kelvin Owusu (1/23/2013 4:56:00 AM)

    rhythmic poem beautiful read (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,253 Points Unwritten Soul (1/22/2013 6:16:00 AM)

    Bloom bloom bloom bloom the heart in any season! ! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,678 Points Neela Nath (1/20/2013 11:02:00 PM)

    A beautiful sonnet with ab ab cd cd eg ef gg rhyme scheme.Loved very much! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Www. Poemhunter.com/m-d-dinesh-nair-2 (1/20/2013 8:53:00 AM)

    ...But if your heart never turns into stone, he will not leave you at all!
    As you won`t be reckless enough to get into such a phase, it is taken for granted that your seasons will ever be fine with love as your shade close to you. You are never going to be left alone. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,038 Points Diane Hine (1/20/2013 4:22:00 AM)

    Even better than the first one. I love the twist in the last 2 lines! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Heather Wilson (1/19/2013 3:18:00 PM)

    I`m sure your heart would never turn to stone, Val, a sweet endearing sonnet (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,454 Points Paul Brookes (1/19/2013 6:17:00 AM)

    Beautiful and tender loved it........................................: O) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 19, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, February 1, 2013


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