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Heather Burns


Sometimes Waiting


Sometimes in the morning
dewdrops melt away

giving up their moisture
for another day

sometimes in the evening
Mr. Moon comes shining through

creating elusive visions
For each of us to view.














sometimes sometimes sometimes sometimes sometimes sometime sometimes
sometimes sometimes sometimes sometimes sometimes sometime sometimes
sometimes sometimes sometimes sometimes sometimes sometime sometimes
sometimes sometimes sometimes sometimes sometimes sometime sometimes
sometimes sometimes sometimes sometimes sometimes sometime sometimes
sometimes sometimes sometimes sometimes sometimes sometime sometimes

Submitted: Sunday, January 05, 2014
Edited: Thursday, August 07, 2014

Topic(s): sometimes


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  • Veteran Poet - 4,749 Points Amitava Sur (4/15/2014 8:52:00 PM)

    It's a nature's mood, like today you'll take sandwich and tomorrow a burger .... nice reading (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,576 Points Soulful Heart (2/8/2014 12:21:00 AM)

    sometimes................everything is a hope of these sometimes to be everytime...isn't it? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 617 Points Noreen Carden (1/28/2014 5:50:00 AM)

    Hi Heather a lovely poem showing natures beauty from morning to evening we sometimes take it all for granted so a nice timely reminder (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 951 Points Kanav Justa (1/8/2014 9:26:00 AM)

    Could see my mind in peace as i read this poem... that tells the level of this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 306 Points Shahzia Batool (1/6/2014 12:14:00 AM)

    a very focused write with a rhyming structure...Ms. Burns, your poems are always brief, lucid and witty! ! ! an interesting thing about the gender of the moon is that in our native and national language urdu Moon is male as you addressed as Mr. personifying it so creatively, and sometimes it is addressed as goddess moon...it is frequently used and variously interpreted phenomenon in poetry from the world of nature!
    beautiful poem! ! ! (Report) Reply

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