So Far Yet So Near Poem by Ancita Michael

So Far Yet So Near

Rating: 4.5


Close your eyes and breathe in slowly.
Smile a bit and picture me mentally.
When I do this routine the distances vanish,
feeling of being miles apart seem to banish.
Now pose a smile and join my fantasy tour
You be the prince and I will be your lady

With your friends playing the volleyball,
On the tropical beach looking sweet.
Spinning around us, is the whole world,
Everything blurs off as our eyes meet.
Feels like my prayers are answered,
the perfect guy i always awaited.

Shaken by my giggling friends.
Brought back from my hallucination,
Turning pink I look away, couldn't stop,
myself from stealing another glimpse.

You catch me glance and smile at me,
As I dream of a way to make u mine,
I felt the whole world watching me,
Hundreds of butterflies fly,
As I wave back at you.

I hear the teasing chorus,
Of my friends and the cupid.
Its just like a fairytale,
A dream come true, Opening my eyes,
I realised it was really a dream.
Blushing a bit I walk ahead,
Feeling closer to your heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 03 November 2012

Nice poem, you know what to write! keep writing_Soul

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Paddy Jansen 03 November 2012

Your poem feels like the perfect dream

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Yash Shinde 04 November 2012

very beautiful..........dreamy and fantasized..........a bit imagery lots of imagination and emotions make your poem a complete one :)

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Vijay Sai R 04 November 2012

very nice poetically exposed...its like a dream come true

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Reyvrex Questor Reyes 03 November 2012

Very romantic. The opening lines are meditative and sweet.

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Sodoko Zavaki 18 November 2012

wow... great poem. I like it, it's kewl Keep writing XD

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Dr Library @ Debadarshi 11 November 2012

great imagery..... I could imagine the beaches in mumbai, although i have never been there.......Really enjoyed! ! ! reflects the feelings, sedate within a heart, beautifully, in a mellifluous voice as this is more often i can call a beautiful song sang in pen& paper.....

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Rushabh Bansal 09 November 2012

hey dats awesome dear.. very innocent n beautiful..

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Chandra Thiagarajan 09 November 2012

A fantastic dream of fantasy well brought out. Thanks for the kind invitation.I feel you have a great world or poetry before you.Very best wishes. Chandra Thiagarajan

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Jaya Mishra 06 November 2012

Very beautiful........ Spinin around us is the whole world Evrythin blurrs off as our eyes.meet.... Turnin pink I look away, cudnt stop Myself from stealin another glimpse...... Each of ur lines z magical.... Loved it! !

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