Haiku: The Jewel Poem by Ancita Michael
Haiku: The Jewel
The Silver jewel falls
to the bottomless ocean
from the moon and lost
Saturday, November 3, 2012
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is my first Haiku
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Ancita Michael
03 November 2012
@Efe: Thank you for your comment. i have made the changes.
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Efe Benjamin
03 November 2012
hi frnd, nice haiku poem, i luv it, but check d syllables, i tink u're havin 18 or 19, instead of d conventional 17 syllables..odawise its beautyful..
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4/19/2024 5:58:19 AM # 1.0.0.1119
This Haiku is really a jewel.Best wishes. Chandra Thiagarajan