Rainy Love Story Poem by Ancita Michael

Rainy Love Story

Rating: 4.8


Outside the open window pane,
Dark angry clouds mobbed the sky,
Terrified crowd emptied the lane,
Feeling the outpour from the heavens high.

Floral curtains blew by breeze,
Hiding from the wrath filled sky,
Sweeping tresses to a bun in ease,
I looked out with a deep sigh.

Looking fas as i can for a trace,
Of shadow of my lost soul mate,
Tired and broken from the chase,
Longing his presence before its late.

Walking down the creaky stairs,
Memories flash through my mind,
This broken heart will never dare,
To leave you in my past behind.

Opened the door to drench my sorrow,
Without you I need not a tomorrow.


Cold droplets kiss my cheek,
Making the tears disappear.
Oh! How I wish you were here,
For you my heart, mind, soul seek.

Searching eye drenched in rain,
Also the heavy heart drain,
To start afresh, turned around,
Just to hear the bells sound.

Taking a spritely sprint,
Seeing flowers as a hint,
Finally ends my wait,
To have you in my sight.

Warm Hug, so close to hear the beat,
jolt of millions volt runs, feeling the heat,
Heavens applauded as our lips meet.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chandra Thiagarajan 09 November 2012

Rainy Love Story is a creditable poem written well with rhyme and rhythm.K udos.

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Unwritten Soul 02 November 2012

Traditional poetry, i like it and you make it very well...well done and the story was really fun! _Soul

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Aung Si 01 November 2012

Oh, nice whispers of the one in love. The heart will keep on murmuring its language until it gets its longing and desire.Well one, my vote is 8.

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Reyvrex Questor Reyes 28 October 2012

Wow, you have three rhyme schemes in your poem. I also believe in soulmates, even in reincarnation where a loved one may have been also in one's past.

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