Poetheart (back)

(05/23/1960 / Rio de Janeiro)

Silent September


In silent september i slept
profoundly
in a desperate hibernation
in a cove where poets die

nights and days slipped by me
a tear dream pierced an ancient love
where were you?
dreams in secrecy too

surrounded by nothing
i realized i am alone
and just a
a silent september
asleep with me

Submitted: Tuesday, October 15, 2013
Edited: Thursday, October 24, 2013

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

What do you think this poem is about?



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Poet's Notes about The Poem

See you on september! ! !

Comments about this poem (Silent September by Poetheart (back) )

Enter the verification code :

  • Rookie - 87 Points Liliana ~el (10/18/2013 3:35:00 PM)

    Wow I too had a silent September last year, wracking my mind, seemingly alone (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 328 Points Krishnakumar Chandrasekar Nair (10/17/2013 11:00:00 AM)

    And rest Ye well in silent September
    And rise when the season gets a little warmer
    With new verses and flowers to greet
    The world as it turns into a colorful retreat...

    (very good poem - and welcome to my page) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 850 Points Susan Lacovara (10/16/2013 11:36:00 PM)

    I too know of silent Septembers. This was such a well expressed poem. I very much enjoyed it and will continue to explore your poetry. Thank you for your comments on my poem, as well. I welcome new friends! Goodnight poetess...I send an evening's wish of PEACE (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 850 Points Susan Lacovara (10/16/2013 11:35:00 PM)

    I too know of silent Septembers. This was such a well expressed poem. I very much enjoyed it and will continue to explore your poetry. Thank you for your comments on my poem, as well. I welcome new friends! Goodnight poetess...I send an evening's wish of PEACE (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Altair Laahad (10/15/2013 11:20:00 AM)

    i LOVE YOUR FINAL STANZA
    surrounded for nothing
    i realized i am alone
    and just a
    a silent september
    asleep with me

    unique and very well closed (Report) Reply

Read all 13 comments »

PoemHunter.com Updates

Poem of the Day

poet John Clare

I love to see the old heath's withered brake
Mingle its crimpled leaves with furze and ling,
While the old heron from the lonely lake
Starts slow and flaps its melancholy wing,
...... Read complete »

 

Modern Poem

poet Grace Paley

 

Trending Poems

  1. Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night, Dylan Thomas
  2. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  3. All the World's a Stage, William Shakespeare
  4. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  5. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  6. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  7. Emmonsail's Heath in Winter, John Clare
  8. A Fairy Song, William Shakespeare
  9. Annabel Lee, Edgar Allan Poe
  10. If, Rudyard Kipling

Trending Poets

[Hata Bildir]