Poetheart Morgan

Rookie - 318 Points (05/23/1960 / Rio de Janeiro)

Dont drink me!


I met a gentleman tonight
and he introduced himself to me
meek and quiet

wants nothing of me
and told me so suddenly
Only two sips madam! !
as I did not know him
I drank three sips

and he, who came from as far
and who that was so beloved
told me
when you write
write in the wind from 11 am.

because the wind that hitting you the night
invades and disturbs you
then do not drink of my love
before the trees sounding the 12 hours

Dont be sad! And hang on!

I am here not to comfort you but to explain

how great is my love for you

and bigger is my solitude for you drink to me

Dont drink me!

Dont love me!

Hear that morning was made for you

simple and honest

Just dont love me

but let me love you at the end!

Submitted: Saturday, July 06, 2013
Edited: Thursday, July 18, 2013

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Comments about this poem (Dont drink me! by Poetheart Morgan )

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (9/15/2013 1:05:00 PM)

    second read I enjoyed this one very much (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 267 Points David Wood (7/8/2013 5:25:00 AM)

    This is a lovely poem, I enjoyed the journey you painted. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (7/8/2013 4:52:00 AM)

    fabulous and nicely penned.love should be bilateral.the one who slants is a true lover.
    ~nb (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (7/7/2013 9:18:00 PM)

    Great poem Love Heart (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (7/7/2013 5:31:00 PM)

    a good write. enjoyed the read (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 168 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (7/7/2013 2:09:00 AM)

    What a poem, marvelous write Poetheart.
    Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,586 Points Bri Edwards (7/7/2013 12:50:00 AM)

    an intriguing poem. i had a bit of trouble. perhaps english is not your 'first' language? ? i'm not sure. maybe it is my 'fault' i don't understand some of this. i don't agree with some of the structure/wording. but i am pretty darn sure there is a mistake in the line:
    wants nothing to me.......How would it sound to you as nothing OF me? just a typo perhaps.
    i especially liked:
    write in the wind from 11 am
    because the wind that hitting you the night
    invades and disturbs you

    and: Only two sips madam! !
    as I did not know you
    I drank three sips...................i like it though i do not understand it.

    what does the following mean i wonder:

    before the trees sounding the 12 hours

    thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,654 Points Ramesh Rai (7/6/2013 7:09:00 PM)

    beautiful write.love your write (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,022 Points Unwritten Soul (7/6/2013 10:24:00 AM)

    I love this new write, very nice! ! once i heard something
    Dont drink me said something from tea cup hahaha joking_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,120 Points Sekharan Pookkat (7/6/2013 8:29:00 AM)

    A marvelous presentation
    Good work (Report) Reply

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