Dont Drink Me! Poem by Poetheart Morgan

Dont Drink Me!

Rating: 4.8


I met a gentleman tonight
and he introduced himself to me
meek and quiet

wants nothing of me
and told me so suddenly
Only two sips madam! !
as I did not know him
I drank three sips

and he, who came from as far
and who that was so beloved
told me
when you write
write in the wind from 11 am.

because the wind that hitting you the night
invades and disturbs you
then do not drink of my love
before the trees sounding the 12 hours

Dont be sad! And hang on!

I am here not to comfort you but to explain

how great is my love for you

and bigger is my solitude for you drink to me

Dont drink me!

Dont love me!

Hear that morning was made for you

simple and honest

Just dont love me

but let me love you at the end!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sekharan Pookkat 06 July 2013

A marvelous presentation Good work

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Unwritten Soul 06 July 2013

I love this new write, very nice! ! once i heard something Dont drink me said something from tea cup hahaha joking_Soul

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Ramesh Rai 06 July 2013

beautiful write.love your write

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Bri Edwards 07 July 2013

an intriguing poem. i had a bit of trouble. perhaps english is not your 'first' language? ? i'm not sure. maybe it is my 'fault' i don't understand some of this. i don't agree with some of the structure/wording. but i am pretty darn sure there is a mistake in the line: wants nothing to me.......How would it sound to you as nothing OF me? just a typo perhaps. i especially liked: write in the wind from 11 am because the wind that hitting you the night invades and disturbs you and: Only two sips madam! ! as I did not know you I drank three sips...................i like it though i do not understand it. what does the following mean i wonder: before the trees sounding the 12 hours thanks for sharing.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 07 July 2013

What a poem, marvelous write Poetheart. Siya_! !

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Heather Wilkins 15 September 2013

second read I enjoyed this one very much

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David Wood 08 July 2013

This is a lovely poem, I enjoyed the journey you painted.

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Nader Baheri 08 July 2013

fabulous and nicely penned.love should be bilateral.the one who slants is a true lover. ~nb

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R.j. Wynn 07 July 2013

Great poem Love Heart

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Heather Wilkins 07 July 2013

a good write. enjoyed the read

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