Valerie Dohren

Silver Star - 4,011 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

She Has Gone Now - Poem by Valerie Dohren

She has gone now, lost to dreaming
High above the vapoured clouds -
As a wispy phantom drifting;
Wrapped within enfolded shrouds

No more words to stir my being
Nor beguile my fretted mind -
Silent as the moon yet fading;
With my life no more to bind

She has gone now, I remaining
E'er to dwell in solitude -
So bereft of thoughts to ponder;
For my heart be now subdued

Shall I reach out, try to touch her
As she floats through ether's void -
Yet I fear I may not grasp her;
Thus my spirit be destroyed

She has gone now, I am pleading
Her return will ne'er be long -
She has gone now, I am waiting;
And in waiting, sing her song


Poet's Notes about The Poem

My fickle Muse.....!

Comments about She Has Gone Now by Valerie Dohren

  • Gold Star - 16,408 Points * Sunprincess * (11/27/2013 1:07:00 AM)

    I love the poem, the poets notes and your muse :) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 432 Points Danny Draper (3/13/2013 6:29:00 AM)

    And what a song in waiting sung and in each word an enduring meliferous note that shall hold its place and beckon her til by her volition she is returned with grace. A lovely poem, thank you Valerie. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,733 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (3/8/2013 4:00:00 AM)

    Wonderful piece of writing. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,646 Points Dorothy- A. Holmes (3/5/2013 5:41:00 PM)

    Absolutely beautiful...A heart tender! Love the sentiment! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,353 Points Unwritten Soul (3/2/2013 11:05:00 AM)

    Val, your tone always soft and enticing! beautiful and it really amazing...she has gone but your muse is always exist _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 300 Points Dee Corpolongo (2/28/2013 9:01:00 AM)

    Oh, such amazing beauty....put together into words...Excellentl, Val.
    Beautiful flow and soft rhythm filled with grace and beauty abound. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,284 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (2/28/2013 2:58:00 AM)

    I think she is a foregone tease.
    But does her jod professionally and elegantly (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,698 Points Anthony Di''anno (2/27/2013 1:24:00 PM)

    How do you do it Val? Even without your muse you manage to write yet another wonderful poem. When she does return can you ask her if she has seen mine anywhere? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 140 Points John Brown (2/24/2013 9:22:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem Val - simple as that. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Owain Glyn (2/23/2013 1:29:00 PM)

    As usual a very clever write1 (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 724 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (2/23/2013 9:13:00 AM)

    Every poet experiences this flight of Muse now and then! She is very much with you now, else you couldn't have written this grand poem! ! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,107 Points Diane Hine (2/22/2013 7:09:00 PM)

    Your muse is very flighty - perhaps you need one who is more grounded. Seriously though, a poem that glides as effortlessly as she does. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,720 Points Neela Nath (2/21/2013 8:31:00 AM)

    So melodious it is. The ray of optimism is peeping wonderfully.Hats off dear Val. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Www.poemhunter.com/m-d-dinesh-nair-2 Search 2 (2/21/2013 5:29:00 AM)

    Valsa said it right... She is vey much within you Valerie.
    This optimism sounds good and you belong to a world desirable for all with such soft thoughts (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,422 Points Valsa George (2/20/2013 11:05:00 PM)

    She is around you, nay, very much within you! A lovely poem! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 35 Points Terry M (2/20/2013 12:58:00 PM)

    Bravo.............well done, I do hope you keep up the good work! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Kelvin Owusu (2/20/2013 1:45:00 AM)

    beautifully written i loved it (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,591 Points Lyn Paul (2/20/2013 12:21:00 AM)

    Written beautifully, very touching. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Heather Wilson (2/19/2013 2:58:00 AM)

    A sweet poem touched with sadness, keep singing Val. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,910 Points Dave Walker (2/18/2013 2:10:00 PM)

    A very beautiful muse. It would sound really good
    With the piano. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 18, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, February 18, 2013


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