S.zaynub Kamoonpuri


Selecting Relaxation Techniques - Poem by S.zaynub Kamoonpuri

A
lavender
scented
jacuzzi
rose
petals
floating
about
a
mimicry
of
nature's
lotus
but
in
the
bubbly
bubblebath
as
soft
gleams
of
moon
beams
seep
in
through
translucent
glass
Luxuriate
in
the
ephemeral
inhale
in
the
aromatic
incenses
of
oils
and
essential
oils
Bathe
in
breathtaking
joy
euphoric
Like
in
a
Turkish
Bath
wherein
to
indulge
yourself,
in
steamy
massage
complete
with
the
charm
of
the
exotic
All
artificial
tranquilizers.

A
delicious
languor
to
steal
over
in
the
languid
twilight
upon
the
meadow
watching
a
small
animated
spectrum
in
the
after-
glow
flitting
among
pretty
petals
the
gossamer-
winged
mayflies
and
dragonflies
Fluttering
among
delicate
filaments
in
the
dusky
eve
the
flimsy
butterflies
All
in
all,
nature's
balms.

But
better
still,
for
a
far
more
soothing
effect

that
of
serene
ambient
prayer
That
blissful
feeling
of
connection

with the divine, the
Omni-present One.
In peaceful meditation
in spiritual reflection
In humble prostration
and rosary bead
adoration
for the Omniscient's
glorification
With the potential of
calming any nervous
wrecks!
In ethereal bliss hoping
for eternal bliss
That therapeutic
sensation
of being under His All-
encompassing
ever-loving care and
compassion.
A supernaturally
soothing ecstasy
the most relaxing
delicasy
in the loftiest of
perception.


Comments about Selecting Relaxation Techniques by S.zaynub Kamoonpuri

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (4/8/2014 11:50:00 PM)

    ...........a soothing piece..............I can smell the lavender scent, and feel the rose petals......lovely write.......... (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,687 Points Bri Edwards (3/28/2014 4:57:00 PM)

    hey S., i saw this poem mentioned in your comment to '20 little angels'.

    i wonder what artificial tranquilizers are.

    have you thought about opening a spa? ? ? sounds like you have some good ideas here. thanks for sharing. bri ;) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ibrar Siddiqi (3/11/2014 8:46:00 AM)

    Quite good. Excellent. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 534 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (2/27/2014 3:32:00 AM)

    A fine poem of pattern type where the river of life drips down and flows on in to spiritual unification.Very inspiring. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kristian Lorenzen (2/27/2014 2:11:00 AM)

    A splendid poem! !

    K. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Carly Kisley (2/26/2014 6:52:00 PM)

    Very well written. Love the details. Imagery is always my favorite. well done. =D (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,276 Points Shahzia Batool (2/25/2014 11:54:00 PM)

    Zaynub, stay grateful to Allah the Almighty Who blessed you with a fine hand you have shown here...A
    delicious
    languor
    to
    steal
    over
    in
    the
    languid
    twilight
    upon
    the
    meadow...imagistic! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 48 Points Tabasom Azadee (2/25/2014 1:41:00 PM)

    very good
    your attention are to important thing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 28,124 Points Valsa George (2/25/2014 4:16:00 AM)

    Wonderful.... got the aroma and coolness of a 'bubbly bubble bath'! But the serenity and soothing ecstasy achieved by being in communion with that supreme power is no match to any other relaxation technique! ! Love the diction and the inimitable way, the truth is presented! ! Kudos! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,939 Points Soulful Heart (2/24/2014 12:03:00 PM)

    Hey thats fatastic......so unique in tantalising our curiosity to wait for yhe next therapy. Yet the final universal therapy of submitting urself to that supreme one....such bliss to find in ur words....great way of putting it.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 30 Points Eeshah Raaziah Naqavi (2/23/2014 4:02:00 AM)

    Such a beautiful and absorbing piece of poetry! I loved reading it too! Zaynub, I must say, you're a jewel in the world of poets! Keep it up and high! :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 23, 2014

Poem Edited: Sunday, December 14, 2014


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