S.zaynub Kamoonpuri


I Love The Sea My Way - Poem by S.zaynub Kamoonpuri

I would've perhaps liked to swim in you O' sea
only if sharks and octopi didn't inhabit thee

Perhaps I would've swum and dived deeper in glee
if piranhas and sting rays couldn't attack me!

I would've gone far a' seafaring
with a daredevil like daring
if jellyfish in seas weren't thriving
I would've loved to go scuba-diving

But since at sea such dangers lurk
I shan't be shark chow in marine murk!

So I'm content with reading, watching aquatic seafaring tales
of olden ships, wrecked vessels, treasure troves and blue whales

But on a sandy beach I can sit all day
The sight of water so refreshing I must say

I've a feeling O' God you like water too
for most of the earth you covered in water true

So in the ebbing tide salt water I'm content just splashing my feet
A rare starfish, crabs and seaweed to meet

Perhaps if I'd been brave like my sister I would've braved the depths of the ocean
for she's scared of nothing, not bats or swordfish, except for 'roaches in flying motion.


Comments about I Love The Sea My Way by S.zaynub Kamoonpuri

  • Bronze Star - 2,567 Points Ken E Hall (3/24/2015 11:54:00 PM)

    Loved the way you love the sea minus all the nasty' s...have seen sharks under the sea from a steel cage still scary
    but safe and the only way...as the poem goes on the beach view is a sure fire inner...lovely to read...regards (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 18,117 Points Roseann Shawiak (10/31/2014 3:11:00 AM)

    Totally enjoyed reading your poem, imagery was fantastic, I felt like I was feeling all of these emotions and not wanting to meet up with any of these sea creatures, like the sharks and piranha! Great gentle humor throughout also. Thank you for sharing this amusing and well composed poem. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,455 Points Eugene Levich (9/5/2014 6:36:00 PM)

    This is the third poem of yours I've read... and loved! I have just added you to my (very short!) list of favorite poets! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 684 Points Leloudia Migdali (8/31/2014 11:06:00 AM)

    Nice poem! I liked every line of it! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 20,480 Points Valsa George (5/22/2014 6:59:00 AM)

    The sea with the rising billows, ravenous sharks and other monsters is scary....! But watching it sitting on the sea strand is such fun.... Enjoyed this humorous write! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,908 Points Soulful Heart (2/21/2014 11:55:00 AM)

    So cute..... same as me.....watching and dreaming to glide like dolphins yet never dare to plunge in fear of sharks that seem to be just waiting for us: -) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,641 Points Ramesh Rai (2/15/2014 3:03:00 AM)

    A good daring write with high thoughts and desires. I think you have already gone through the moment while scribing this beautiful emotion. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,735 Points Diane Hine (2/11/2014 5:16:00 AM)

    Swimming on a warm night is wonderful but the thought of sharks puts me off too. A real joy to read this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,323 Points Melikhaya Zagagana (2/8/2014 7:20:00 AM)

    Thanks beautiful written, i like it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 25 Points Mohammed Al-balushi (2/6/2014 3:12:00 AM)

    lovely n very beautiful poem. I loved it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aisha Love (2/3/2014 8:37:00 PM)

    I actually pictured the sea, great poem! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,107 Points Geetha Jayakumar (1/29/2014 11:46:00 AM)

    Your poem took me on a wonderful seafaring....Wonderful imaginary. Loved reading it. Excellent use of words... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Abu Sayeed Obaidullah (1/24/2014 3:04:00 AM)

    beautifully composed. would like to be in touch with your poems always. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 743 Points Louis Rams (1/18/2014 2:27:00 PM)

    you've captured what many fear to say ~ EXCELLENT WRITE (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 122 Points marvin brato (1/17/2014 3:58:00 PM)

    Fun to read, great imaginary! Enjoyed it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rose Nazar (1/17/2014 1:45:00 PM)

    I like it, but the word are kinda complicated, still keep it up, (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,996 Points Brian Johnston (1/17/2014 11:46:00 AM)

    Ring Ring Ring Ring! ! ! ! We have another winner folks!
    Another 10 from me my dear poetess. I have not done a lot of scuba diving but I can tell you you are missing a lot. I dove once off of Lanai (an island near Maui) to visit one of the scuba diving wonders of the world called The Cathedral as I recall. The Cathedral is a choral formation about 90 ft. down which looks a little like an eskimo's igloo. There is a door on the side where you enter and a hole in the ceiling you can exit from. But inside the light filters through cracks in the coral walls that give you the feeling of dark stained glass, like God could be present (and of course He is) . Maybe I should write a poem for you about it? But as beautiful as this was the most amazing part for me was the underwater surges or currents which would push you around like a toy,15 ft forward,15 ft back, so the swimming toward your goal (The Cathedral) was like this crazy rhythmic dance, better than any amusement park ride I have ever been on! What a trip! There are always negative sides as well that you never hear about (so I'm telling you) , like the time I was trying to get back on our dive boat after the seas had come up (it was calm when we started) . The ladder on the side of the boat was moving up and down 15 or 20 ft. and you had to grab ahold of it at the bottom of it's swing to get back on the boat. As soon as you grab ahold it shoots you out of the water like a rocket. I nearly threw up in my face mask on that one! Hey Lass, tell you sister roaches in flying motion are nothing. It is my favorite line in the poem however... Kudos! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,761 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (1/16/2014 12:14:00 PM)

    Swimming in the sea of success from a poetic perspective. Well done my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,292 Points Kevin Patrick (1/15/2014 2:50:00 PM)

    Yikes! don't work at a tourist bureau or you'll scare off the customers. A great vision and finely writing, I have only seen the ocean three times in my life, and I must admit the strangeness of looking on the horizon and seeing endless sea, and diving into the salt water for the first time was an amazing experience. You are a delightful writer with original idea. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,063 Points Kanav Justa (1/15/2014 12:42:00 AM)

    , , amusing write, , , , loved it, , , , wonderful use of rhyming words in this poem, , , (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 7, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, January 8, 2014


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