Sentinel Of Love Poem by s.zaynab kamoonpury

Sentinel Of Love

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Some lover's jealousies are such a tight squeezing embrace<br>
that the loved one can't help feeling<br>
coiled and embroiled<br>
like in the grip of a loving beast or literally a bear's hug<br>
And which makes her regret<br>
why God ever chose to model her into a beauty.<br>
For the perfection of her face and figure<br>
highlights to him his imperfections<br>
such that her illustrious famed beauty<br>
transforms him into a suspicious tamed beast! <br>
<br>
A possessive kind of guy miner tis he<br>
who jealously guards<br>
this beauty secret<br>
like upon having struck gold<br>
and wishes to lock her up from the world
like a real-life Rapunzel's witch<br>

But as no black clouds can hide the radiant sun<br>
her world soon comes to know<br>
of her immaculate screened charms and beauty<br>
despite his protests and measures.<br>
<br>
Yet in a world of unscruplous looters<br>
this louvred love cage turns out to be that blessing in disguise<br>
She can no longer be preyed upon by any predator guys.<br>
<br>
Thus both lucky and unfortunate is the beautiful woman<br>
But let her bloom and breathe<br>
in love's cell or its engulfing dungeon<br>
for a free bird she was never meant to be for long<br>
And let her lover be her love's protective warden<br>
so no body but he is lured by her look and lovesong! <br>
She can't just forever fly and sing foot-loose and fancy-free<br>
A plethora of cocks out there might try to charm her<br>
with their new feathers<br>
serenading her with new love songs in the wind, <br>
All she must do is<br>
snap out from<br>
and slip away from<br>
their flirty fantasy.<

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Personal life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 13 November 2013

Jealousy in a lover can prove very dangerous in the long run though initially it may save you as a protective armour from the advances of other predators! But beware, the sentinel can turn to be your assassin! Great write! !

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Ramesh Rai 14 November 2013

jealousy is a natural phenomenon when love is getting its highest peak. for every right moment negative feeling leads to its perfection.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 15 November 2013

Hey valsa yor coment realy scared me. I fear my man cud b my assassin in his dark love! ! But i cant escape frm his clutches ah! : O

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Liliana ~el 16 November 2013

Nice like how it was easy going and described both being protected but also caged Also like the relationships to stories and animals :)

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Stan Petrovich 17 November 2013

I seem to see some rather hidden meanings in this poem that I will not address for fear of failure. Overall it is quite heavy-hitting & I agree, on the surface, that which you put so bluntly.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 16 December 2014

Hey im a lady poetess not a mr.

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Melikhaya Zagagana 16 December 2014

Detailed and creative portrait of jelousy unfolded from a pure focussed and rare talents that we have. nice...Mr Zanub really liked.

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Anil Kumar Panda 28 December 2013

thats a nice ink.beautiful concept.keep inking.

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Misnia Bahri Awaludin 23 December 2013

very true said lovely poetry

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Heather Wilkins 09 December 2013

jealousy can be very hurtful there is no need for it if two people are truly in love

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