Scenery Medley Contrasts! Poem by s.zaynab kamoonpury

Scenery Medley Contrasts!

Rating: 5.0


Mushrooms and meadows
Sunshine and shadows

Gentle ripples on the calm river
Foaming rapids in white water

The jungle echoes in the semi-darkness
while daylight creepy-crawlies clear the mess.

Peasants toiling and pheasants scratching
as I spy a cricket somersaulting

The cactus the desert's prickly femme-fatale
elsewhere a lone leaf floats in the canal

Prairie dogs go popping
while hares go hopping
and ladies go shopping

Swans have formed a V-line
The flora too is divine
as bees swarm in bee-line.

Seista seizes birdlovers too
Thus they miss out on the hoopoe's song
For the hoopoe, it does not sing on cue
since a bird may sing anytime to woo.

What a medley eh of scenery
Murky eve and dawning greenery

Ah, wherever you go nature's so panoramic
While we make pictures God made what's picturesque!

Tuesday, November 20, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: Art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gordon Tseng 28 November 2012

Page words go popping while poems go hopping and readers go shopping Insights have formed a V-line The feelings too are divine as rhythms swarm in wine. Screen seizes virtual lovers too Thus they miss out on the window's song for the window, it does not sing on cue since the wind anytime may it sing to woo.

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Lyn Paul 28 November 2012

What beautiful words. It really is a lovely poem

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 28 November 2012

extreme imagery with nice wording and twisted also rhythmic....

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Marieta Maglas 20 November 2012

beautiful poem-I enjoyed reading it-thank you for sharing!

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Asif Andalib 21 November 2012

Wow wonderful write on nature. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 October 2019

Wonderful imagery and imaginary. You have so brilliantly composed this poem taking different contrasted beings and things. Haunting expression. I appreciate your art. The concluding two lines say much about nature's panoramic and God's picturesque. Thank you dear madam, full vote for this poem.

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Victoria Donnelly 16 April 2013

Wonderfully crafted...a spectrum of contrasts packed with evocative imagery.

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 09 December 2012

Very well written, comes so easily. You are a wonderful writer.

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Stevie Taite 06 December 2012

This poem is full of interesting comparisons and well described, unique little observations! Cute, funny and keeps you reading!

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Ruth Walters 29 November 2012

an easy read, very catchy and descriptive

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