Saint Peter's Response …… [inspired By "………..And If………..", A Poem By Ph Member Ruth Walters; Short; Humour/Humor; Love; Religion; Afterlife; Fantasy] Poem by Bri Edwards

Saint Peter's Response …… [inspired By "………..And If………..", A Poem By Ph Member Ruth Walters; Short; Humour/Humor; Love; Religion; Afterlife; Fantasy]



When Ruthie and her long-time gentleman lover.....
died and, the Pearly Gates of Heaven, they did discover,
it was old St. Pete who barred their way, then asked:

"Which of you lived without sin, .....
though it be a frightful task? "


They'd both sinned, a great deal in fact, and 'together', truth be told,
but Ruth spoke up without fear and said "We both did"; Ruth was BOLD.
Then to her and her 'lifetime lover/fellow sinner' Saint Peter finally... said:

"Ruthie, I'm glad you're here, and, SURPRISE! ! ! ! ,
...........you ALL get in here when you're dead."

(May 11,2014)

Sunday, May 11, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: humor
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
hey, 'humor' is as good a topic as any for this, i hope! Ruth Walters is one of my favorite poets to read. here is the poem she wrote which inspired me.

'..............and if...............

and if in truth our love's to be eternal
until the sun and moon refuse to shine,
then happiness is ours to own forever
withstanding all the ravages of time.

and if we reach the pearly gates of heaven
and the angels ask me whether you have sinned,
I'll tell them we were sinners both together
and without you I'd rather not go in.....

Ruth Walters
Submitted: Wednesday, September 19,2012
Edited: Sunday, January 12,2014'

:) bri

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AND about three years later, I, Bri, have just edited my poem
quite a bit.


March 2017 :) bri
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eugene Levich 20 May 2014

Bri, Are you suggesting that you and I both have a chance to get in there? Whew! I'm really sweating it! If we make it in the ice cream's on me!

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Akhtar Jawad 16 May 2014

Humor or satire, what ever it may be, it's nice.

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Eugene Levich 15 May 2014

Neat riff (Bri-ff?) on a good poem!

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 13 May 2014

Hello Bri, nice work and good humor. Loyd

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