Sudais Green

Rookie - 20 Points (13/09/1993 / Kumasi, Ghana)

Rain - Poem by Sudais Green

Raining cat and rat or raining sheep and goat is not my problem,
a phenomenon that sends my mind elsewhere,
in solitude or in hullabaloo.

looking up above the sky, i see no river flowing,
no well dugged,
no spring sprinkling,
all i see is an endless cloud ejecting water!

Just to keep the land calm and fertile,
the atmosphere serene and cool.
Still, i wonder how it comes!

Scientists say, it's relief,
and condensational.
But I say it's a miracle!

Poet's Notes about The Poem

I wrote this poem on one rainy evening, just to express my thoughts about how i feel about rainfall!

Comments about Rain by Sudais Green

  • Rookie - 21 Points Dr Tapan Kumar Pradhan (4/26/2013 1:09:00 PM)

    good expression....but you need to work hard to give it the poetic touch....! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 26, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 24, 2013

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