The Pangs Of Her Heart Poem by Sudais Green

The Pangs Of Her Heart



my eyes are filled with tears,
gushing out like water-fountain,
and my conscience ever haunting,
with an unstable mind I scribe,
as I scribble this unfortunate saga. like the unimaginable sound of the
big bang,
her heart pangs,
for it finds no bliss,
to bring it at ease,
her cries echo in my ears and it says'please' I try to compromise,
but my heart says no!
For it doesn't know,
what the future holds,
in this love fantasy. with great fortitude she endures,
as infatuated as she is,
she sees me as a hollow
tormentor.
And believe that she's a winner,
for at the end of the tunnel, there is light.

Friday, January 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
its all about a girl who loves me violently, on the contrary, I feel less for, this consequenly always make me feel guilty and then compelled me to express my emotions in the art of poetry.however, my piece may not be standard, so critics and corrections are welcomed.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 04 May 2015

I hope this works out for both. It is a difficult and sensitive matter. Nicely written about Peace

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blank blank 02 January 2015

This is very interesting. You call the situation 'love fantasy' i understand that you believe this love is temporary. I wish you strength in this ordeal.

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Sudais Green

Sudais Green

Kumasi, Ghana
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