Tiny Flaws …..
A tooth missing from my mouth, a tooth I didn't need.
A well-manicured lawn containing JUST one lonely weed.
The 'h' left out of 'the' on one page of a long novel.
One roof shingle upside down ….on the roof of a hovel.
No spare button sewed on the shirttail ….of a new shirt.
A few stones, not very large, in a garden store bag of dirt.
A five-year old forgetting to say 'Thank you' once in a while.
A tiny pimple at one corner of a new mom's HUGE smile.
The head missing from one match in a box of wooden matches.
When an adorable pet cat, its aging owner's hand, scratches.
The farts Mom makes when, on her way to the toilet, she walks.
Our Latin teacher's tiny lisps as, to her loved-students, she talks.
A brief rain shower during the church picnic, in the park pavilion.
Just one dollar bill missing from a sack meant to carry a million.
A flaw I don't even see in my longed-for engagement diamond ring.
One or two notes sung off-key as the ‘Mormon Choir' did sing.
A young police officer taking five extra minutes to eat her éclair.
The slight smell of a skunk in the balmy beachfront nighttime air.
My wife's denying me ice cream ALMOST always; it just isn't fair! !
The End
(November 25th,2022)
Bri Edwards aka Brian Edward Whitaker
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READERS, You MIGHT enjoy my old poem: Tiny Breasts … [high School Fantasy,50 Years Later! ; Humor; Bikinis; Medium Length; Personal? ? ] bri ;)
Thanks to my readers and commenters. And thanks to any readers of Belle Wassermeister's Tiny Flaws poem which gave mine a plug.
Concentrating on flaws! Just after Thanksgiving! Or were you trying to compose it during Thanksgiving day! Great poem though!
So many questions! How can I remember that far back; it's been over a day now. Thanks, Savita. ;) bri
Perhaps your friend BJ is just getting senile and forgetting his password. : ) : ) : )
You should SCREAM when denied ICE CREAM. At your age, you should be able to eat anything you want.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I have never heard that particular choir sing off-key. They used to be called the 'Mormon Tabernacle Choir' but they are now the 'Tabernacle Choir at Temple Square'.
I think I saw the organ area in the Tabernacle in my early teens while on a Boy Scout bus journey 'out West'. Ok, I was using poetic license in speaking disparagingly re the choir. ; (