R E A D T H I S S O O N A N D W I N O N E M I L L I O N D O L L A R S: Tiny Flaws Poem by Bri Edwards

R E A D T H I S S O O N A N D W I N O N E M I L L I O N D O L L A R S: Tiny Flaws

Rating: 5.0


Tiny Flaws …..


A tooth missing from my mouth, a tooth I didn't need.
A well-manicured lawn containing JUST one lonely weed.
The 'h' left out of 'the' on one page of a long novel.
One roof shingle upside down ….on the roof of a hovel.

No spare button sewed on the shirttail ….of a new shirt.
A few stones, not very large, in a garden store bag of dirt.
A five-year old forgetting to say 'Thank you' once in a while.
A tiny pimple at one corner of a new mom's HUGE smile.

The head missing from one match in a box of wooden matches.
When an adorable pet cat, its aging owner's hand, scratches.
The farts Mom makes when, on her way to the toilet, she walks.
Our Latin teacher's tiny lisps as, to her loved-students, she talks.

A brief rain shower during the church picnic, in the park pavilion.
Just one dollar bill missing from a sack meant to carry a million.
A flaw I don't even see in my longed-for engagement diamond ring.
One or two notes sung off-key as the ‘Mormon Choir' did sing.

A young police officer taking five extra minutes to eat her éclair.
The slight smell of a skunk in the balmy beachfront nighttime air.
My wife's denying me ice cream ALMOST always; it just isn't fair! !

The End

(November 25th,2022)

Bri Edwards aka Brian Edward Whitaker

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Saturday, November 26, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: flaws,small,fun,rhyme
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
'No one' (nearly) was leaving comments, so I added the capitlzed letters/words, well-spaced, and submitted this as an edited poem to try to draw attention to it. Can ya/you blame me for trying? :)))) bri
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 26 November 2022

I have never heard that particular choir sing off-key. They used to be called the 'Mormon Tabernacle Choir' but they are now the 'Tabernacle Choir at Temple Square'.

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Bri Edwards 28 November 2022

I think I saw the organ area in the Tabernacle in my early teens while on a Boy Scout bus journey 'out West'. Ok, I was using poetic license in speaking disparagingly re the choir. ; (

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Bri Edwards 30 November 2022

READERS, You MIGHT enjoy my old poem: Tiny Breasts … [high School Fantasy,50 Years Later! ; Humor; Bikinis; Medium Length; Personal? ? ] bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 30 November 2022

Thanks to my readers and commenters. And thanks to any readers of Belle Wassermeister's Tiny Flaws poem which gave mine a plug.

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Savita Tyagi 27 November 2022

Concentrating on flaws! Just after Thanksgiving! Or were you trying to compose it during Thanksgiving day! Great poem though!

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Bri Edwards 28 November 2022

So many questions! How can I remember that far back; it's been over a day now. Thanks, Savita. ;) bri

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Belle Wassermeister 26 November 2022

Perhaps your friend BJ is just getting senile and forgetting his password. : ) : ) : )

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Bri Edwards 28 November 2022

Belle, Do we NEED passwords NOW? ? ? ;)

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Kim Barney 26 November 2022

You should SCREAM when denied ICE CREAM. At your age, you should be able to eat anything you want.

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Bri Edwards 30 November 2022

I can't. She has 'all the money'. : (

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