Treasure Island

Elena Sandu


Peaceful Conscience


One bite of bread
If fairly shared
Given with love and care
Shall saturate whole brain.

The tiny space fairly shared
Land, chair, or bed
Offered with love and care
Shall give the soul its rest.

Submitted: Sunday, June 23, 2013
Edited: Monday, June 24, 2013

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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (7/17/2013 1:56:00 PM)

    Offered with love and care
    Shall give the soul its rest.

    love cares soul to repose
    brain sates by kiss of gloss, beautiful write by metaphors (Report) Reply

  • Om Chawla (7/4/2013 12:54:00 PM)

    There is no better way of translating nobility of human mind into action. Nice thoughts and very well expressed, Elena. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (7/4/2013 7:43:00 AM)

    Love cures people, both the ones who give it and the ones who recieve it! Sharing our little things with others gives us immense satisfaction! Nice poem with a sweet message! Thanks for your sweet comment my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Danny Draper (6/28/2013 6:43:00 AM)

    This be true if bread whole grain
    But crumbs in bed rough disdain
    And peaceful sleep in chair or bed
    The mind switched off
    And rested soul
    For BLT and coffee hot
    The morning brings
    what years may not. :) (Report) Reply

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